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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006
Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
Mon Aug 14, 2006 3:45 am
Beautiful story. It was so sad! I only have one criticism. There were several instances when you changed tenses. Mostly it was written in past tense, but an occasional word was in present tense form, and this jarred the story slightly. It would read better if you fixed the tense problems. Aside from that, I loved it.
 
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