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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006
Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
Sun Aug 13, 2006 6:00 am
I really enjoyed it! Very well written. Just one little criticism-Dol Guldur is on the other side of the forest from where the elves live. The distance is far too great between the two for a group of elflings to walk there and back in less than a day. Aside from that, I really liked it. Well done!
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Tue Aug 15, 2006 1:19 pm
This looks interesting, a different slant from the usual? Will watch with interest,

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Rohannion
 
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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006
Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
Sun Aug 27, 2006 3:30 am
Great second chapter. Just one little thoug though...I think you could use a beta-reader. The plot is fantastic, but there are a few little errors with grammar, spelling and suchlike. The story would flow better if you got rid of these. Aside from that, I have really enjoyed it so far. I look forward to the next chapter! Oh, poor Legolas! Whatever will become of him?
 
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