Reviews for "The Cursed Queen of Angmar"

Sat Apr 03, 2004 2:02 pm

Excellent! My friend Kwannom told me about this story, telling me how she was hooked on it and just couldn't stop reading once she'd found it. I'm happy to say that I completely agree with her. Highly original, wonderfully written, great plot. A wonderful, new look at the Witch-King. Well done. I'll be watching this one for updates.

Sun Apr 04, 2004 12:26 am

I had never read a story so brilliant, original and authentic before! The exact reason why I was drawn to your fiction was the fact that you were writing about the Witch King of Angmar, a character that intrigues me very much. I thought at first that the plot would be like this: The Nazgul kidnaps poor Ariashal who is forced to become his queen.

When I started reading, I got absolutely stupefied by the way you lead your plot. I'm so happy that you didn't use my ordinary idea! The way you describe the customs of the places, the lives of the Nazgul and the part of the woman in this feudal society is incredible.

I loved the political intrigues, the interaction between the kingdoms, the economics relations and so on. Everything becomes so real because of it. I never thought that I would be able to fall in love for the Witch King of Angmar. I hope he and Ariashal don’t suffer too much. You must update soon, girl, or I’m going insane with all this waiting! BRAVO!

Fri Apr 09, 2004 1:37 am

While looking for a good story to read, I came across yours. Your title was incredibly intriguing, and even more so was your description. A story about the Nazgul...absolutely not to be missed.

Since I started reading it I have become enthralled with it!! Absolutely unbelievable. You have taken the king of the Nazgul and made him into a real person, someone with feelings and goals and hopes, not just the bad guy in the book.

I started reading a chapter or two here and there when I have had time. Tonite, I started at 10...its now 1:30 in the morning...and I still want to read on!!! If it wasn't for my hard-to-keep-open eyelids, I would be even now learning the fate of the queen and her king, now that he has taken her into his confidence regarding his life, and his true self....

This story is fascinating....you are a wonderful writer!!! Thank you!!!!! Very Happy smiley face

Fri Apr 09, 2004 1:59 am

Welcome to all, new and old, who are enjoying this story. Without the encouragement, I probably would have quit long ago.

kwannom: No, that plot would be the easy way. Ariashal never does anything the easy way!
Laughing smiley face

Besides, I wanted to do something that hadn't been done to death.

Tindomiel: It's been a loong time since he's had children to spoil, so he's going to overdo it a little. Just imagine being the poor guy who wants to marry her! Smile smiley face

GoldenButterfly: I promise you that he isn't telling her everything. He's keeping some things secret. Smile smiley face

Fri Apr 09, 2004 10:10 pm

Now you have me all curious, Khazar... Hmmm smiley face

I am very excited about the next chapter (actually, I was excited about all the chapters haha) Exclamation smiley face

Sat Apr 10, 2004 6:21 am

Ooh... When's the next one coming? The Witch-King is fantastic...but I have a sort of feeling that Ariashal is no longer "good", or maybe she's just gotten used to things like Orcs and trolls. But perhaps it's a lesson to everyone: appearances can be misleading.

Bravo! on the story.

Sat Apr 17, 2004 7:59 pm

There's more coming...right??!!! I have been anxiously (and slightly impatiently) awaiting the next chapter to your story!!! I absolutely love it and I really what to know what's next!! When will you be posting again!??

Surprised smiley face

Sun Apr 18, 2004 1:07 am

Hopefully soon--the Mithril Awards are starting, and they tend to vacuum up all of my time. Smile smiley face

But the next chapter has been started, so it should be along soon.

Sun Apr 18, 2004 4:44 pm

I love your story, KhazarKhum! It is original and riveting! It'd been so long between updates that I feared that you'd stopped! I'm glad another chapter is on the way.

5 stars! Great, great story!

PS It's funny, I started re-reading LotR the other day and now I bristle at every reference to the Witch King being evil! Haha! I never thought I'd feel any sympathy for him...

Mon Apr 19, 2004 10:25 pm

I know exactly what you mean, Gwenevere...this story so makes you see the witch-king in a whole new light!!

I am happy to hear there will be more...I will try to be more patient!!

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