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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue Mar 01, 2005 4:38 pm
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Enjoy this breath, this sense of accomplishment: it's been a lovely ride, and I am happy to have been along to see it. And only after you've soaked in the praises and pride will I ask you ... now what?  |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Thu Mar 03, 2005 11:07 pm
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Thank you to everyone who has written and made so many kind & wonderful comments.
AranelMinyatur asked what would have happened if she were really in a "sleep" spell. Well, she would still be in that spell, now and forever, because WK isn't there to break it for her. I don't think she would like being awakened by someone else, and waking up to find her world completely destroyed would probably be too much for her.
Long ago, one of the best writing teachers ever told me "never be cruel to your characters". I think that would apply here. I'm too much of a romantic to do that to them. Her grave should remain undisturbed, and her spirit free. |
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Irith
Joined: 02 Feb 2004 Reviews: 14
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Sat Mar 12, 2005 4:46 pm
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Wow. It's over. I loved it, very amazingly written. I have waited and waited for you to add each new chapter and your story is finally done. Brava! Wonderfully written story. I bow in awe.
~Irith |
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Ceana
Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Reviews: 7
Location: Portland, OR
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Thu Mar 31, 2005 3:53 pm
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I can't believe how much I LOVE this story. Let me be more clear, I LOVE it (period).
Honestly, when I first began reading this, I wasn't sure it was going to be my cup of tea. But your writing kept me coming back. If only to see what would happen next. Suddenly, I HAD to know what was going to happen. After that it was a simple step to NEEDING to know.
I enjoy your writing style and clever plotting. Who would have thought I'd ever have the "hots" for a guy who's invisible. Your OC had depth and lucky her, shared her bed with Mr. Invisible Hottie. What can I say? Nicely done.  |
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snowdrop
Joined: 29 Oct 2004 Reviews: 32
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Sun Apr 03, 2005 4:50 pm
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Wow! je vous aime! this is a wonderful story, i love the idea, adore your writing style, and simply could not leave the computer for hours as i read it straight through. great job, it would be wonderful if there was some sort of sequel or additional part about the witch-king at weathertop, or when the lovely OFC character you created dies.
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Mon May 23, 2005 9:50 am
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Whoa... it's finally complete... I LOVED IT...still LOVING it...
I agree with Snowdrop, though I believe the prerogative of why Ariashal's slumber is never and will never be disturbed is fulfilled... |
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AngmarianRose

Joined: 01 Aug 2005 Reviews: 3
Location: Texas
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Mon Aug 01, 2005 8:37 pm
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| i just read this story for the second time and i have to tell you it's one of the best i've ever read. Ariashal and the rest of your charactors made me want to stay and read until the end. this story made me want to root for the Witch King even more. (what can i say, i love charactors with darker sides). bravo on making a truly exceptional work of fiction! |
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dragonlilleth
Joined: 12 Oct 2005 Reviews: 1
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Tue Oct 18, 2005 11:45 pm
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| This is a wonderful story. I've read it many many times. It's the reason I joined OSA!! Thank you! |
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AngmarofCarnDum

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 24
Location: Carn Dum... where the weather is cold and the women are hot
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Fri Nov 04, 2005 2:27 am
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| Outstanding, probably a classic - all I can say is five stars. |
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Vanilmwe

Joined: 13 Jun 2005 Reviews: 12
Location: Belgium
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Fri Jan 20, 2006 4:08 am
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It's so sad that it's completed... I want more! *starts whining*
Hèhè
Although... Actually it's just perfect!
I love it!
You've described everything so vividly and well, it's just such a GREAT story!
Thank you... |
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