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maidenofthebattle
Joined: 26 Mar 2006 Reviews: 9
Location: US
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 8:16 pm
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| Oh my gosh! That was awesome!!! When I finished the last chapter (at like 2am because I couldn't put it down) all I could say was "oh that was beautiful!" It really was. GREAT JOB!!! Stories like this are why I like OSA! |
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Isadora22

Joined: 07 Aug 2006 Reviews: 45
Location: Angband,
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:08 pm
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| I read the whole story too. That's a very good one. I loved it. Vocabulary was well chosen and places were well described. That's a very good job. It took me three whole days to read it all and I liked the intrigue. I was always eager to know what will happened next at each chapters. I like the style in which one it's written and I think that this will inspire me for my own ones. They are into crossovers section, filling no challenges: just the fun of reading. I wonder to know if you have other ones in that style. |
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LadyAlmaren
Joined: 17 Mar 2006 Reviews: 11
Location: the land of make believe
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Sat Feb 17, 2007 1:32 pm
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Thia is such a interesting fic and a very unique one. Not much is known about the Witch King and you a elaborated on that in a good way. You've made him seem more human which is something that I have never read before. Great Job!  |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:47 am
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| Thanks to all who have read this. It's been a rough year & every nice word helps. |
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innegrire
Joined: 06 Mar 2007 Reviews: 4
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Sun Apr 01, 2007 7:57 am
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This is a wonderful story - not least because it is sympathetic to the Nazgul! I've always been interested in the Nine, and the way you portrayed their various descents into darkness was plausible. Like anyone else, no doubt they had the best of intentions when they accepted the ring. I liked Ariashal; she proved herself adaptable (don't know how I'd cope with an invisible husband) yet she was very real as well. I took a particular shine to Herumor's polite character too.
Your writing is great (not once did any grammatical nightmares jolt me from the story!), and your descriptive passages - such as of the rooms and scenery - are amazing; it was so easy to picture the scene in my mind.
No more rambling... just so you know, you have made a Nazgul fangirl very happy indeed I adored this story. |
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ChristineX

Joined: 12 Apr 2007 Reviews: 2
Location: Southern California
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Sat Apr 21, 2007 11:58 am
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| I've read up through this point and haven't reviewed (bad me!), but I just wanted to let you know that I find this story fascinating. I love the interplay between the Witch-king and Ariashal -- it warms my black little heart that he hasn't lost all of his humanity. It's also an interesting portrait of a time period I don't really know that much about. Kudos! |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Wed May 09, 2007 3:17 pm
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| Thank you all...you may be interested in hearing that Herumor seems to have found a lady friend, and is pestering me to tell his little saga. |
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Sun May 13, 2007 2:56 pm
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| Just wanted to let you know that I loved your wonderful story! I was so intrigued. I can't believe I came to like the Witch King! I am glad to hear there will be more about Herumor. I thought his story was very sad indeed. |
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iluvobiwan91
Joined: 27 Aug 2006 Reviews: 3
Location: AZ
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Tue Jun 26, 2007 1:08 pm
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This is probably one of the best fan fictions I've ever read. I thought it was going to be this, you know, horrible, tragic, abusive story but it was so wonderfully romantic in its own way. This is the second time I've read it and I don't know if I've reviewed it already or not but I just wanted to let you know that this is purely beautiful fiction. *_* Thank you so much!
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:59 am
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| Wow. That was awesome! |
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