Reviews for "The Cursed Queen of Angmar"

Thu Sep 25, 2003 2:42 pm

Stalker? I should be so lucky! Very Happy smiley face

The next 2 are still being beta-ed. And then I will have to run them by admin here, as I think there may be some issues with some dialog. I don't think there's a problem, but Nazgul Dan is concerned, so I will do what he wants.

I am pleased that you like this--that's the sort of thing that keeps me going. RL, OTOH, well--let's not go there. Mad smiley face

Let's just say I'd send my stepsister to the Orcs, except the Orcs are innocent.

Mon Sep 29, 2003 6:36 pm

What a tease! Your chs. are attention grabbing, but way too short. I'm really enjoying your story! Laughing smiley face

Mon Sep 29, 2003 7:29 pm

Hmm. I am supposed to be working tonight. But I got a nifty note in my email saying that you had updated, so I wandered over for my witch-king fix. And was not disappointed. These last two chapters were kind of short and filled with mostly background information... I can only imagine that you're leading up to a major arc. And can't wait.

Tue Sep 30, 2003 10:11 am

ruerho said
> What a tease! Your chs. are attention grabbing, but way too short. I'm really enjoying your story! Laughing smiley face

Thanks! Now, the issue of Chapter Length is really Nazgul Dan's fault. He said that the last two had to be split. I said No, but he insists, and anyone with size 16 shoes always gets his way! Very Happy smiley face

Tue Sep 30, 2003 10:14 am

Viv said
> Hmm. I am supposed to be working tonight. But I got a nifty note in my email saying that you had updated, so I wandered over for my witch-king fix. And was not disappointed. These last two chapters were kind of short and filled with mostly background information... I can only imagine that you're leading up to a major arc. And can't wait.

Like I said, it's all Nazgul Dan's fault that they weren't all one chapter. I'm going to make him read this, so he will believe me. Right now he's recovering from a migrain, but he'll eventually be up to it. Smile smiley face

Wed Oct 01, 2003 9:49 am

EEEK! noo! Must...*gasp* Update...*gasp*...more! [deep breath!] Need...*gasp* Queen...and...Witch King...*gasp!*

ARgh! (sign enough that we, your readers, need more!!!! argh!!) Laughing smiley face

Wed Oct 01, 2003 5:39 pm

flipcharm said
> EEEK! noo! Must...*gasp* Update...*gasp*...more! [deep breath!] Need...*gasp* Queen...and...Witch King...*gasp!*
>
> ARgh! (sign enough that we, your readers, need more!!!! argh!!) Laughing smiley face

ARRGH, indeed! We were at a Pirate Fest all weekend. I managed to get some sort of lung infection (again) but iwth luck I'll have some new chapters up ASAP. Arrrrgggggghhhhhh...... Laughing smiley face

Tue Oct 07, 2003 2:33 pm

This chapter was a nice addition to the story. I especially enjoyed the interaction between Ariashal, the king, and the royal children. He is so patient with them, even when they're being snarky. And the little princess's blue boots were a nice touch. Your reasoning behind the elves' failure to act against Sauron was also impressive. I can see the gears whirring in Gil-Galad's head, and of course he would choose to wait and see, rather than trust and act. Elves, after all, have infinite patience. And not a lot of trust. Very nice bit. Thanks for updating!

Wed Oct 08, 2003 11:28 pm

Thanks, Viv. Smile smiley face

As for the kids, he knows all too well just how precious time is with them. His first son was taken away, his second family was lost when he claimed the ring, and other children were killed.

Besides, when they get too rowdy he can always have their nurses take them. Very Happy smiley face

Thu Nov 06, 2003 1:15 pm

His first son, eh? See, now you've made me curious. I bet you have a whole stack of backstory on this guy. Any chance, after you finish this tale, you might write scenes/snippets/ficlets about witch-king: the early years?

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