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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Fri Jan 16, 2004 5:23 pm
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This was absolutely thrilling.
good lord.
i have to tell ya, at first I was a bit reticent. i meant, witch king? romance? Hmmm...
I even saw the great feedback to this story, which was what got me thinking- yeah, well, it must be a good one.
one day I sat down to read the frist chapters. you know, just to have a taste.
Could not rest till I've read them all.
And I agree with you and Ariel about the weathertop thing. Come to think of it, they were rather slow at the bruinen, weren't they? i mean, they had Arwen AND Frodo only a few feet from them; but they stopped, and talked. they gave Arwen her sweet time to invoke whatever she could. Or Elrond/Glorfindel (for the book! canon fanatics). Whatever magic kept the valley (wink wink) had some time to rise.
Delicious. Absolutely delicious. And ferion is simply disgusting. Everything is credible (with the exception perhaps of the elves... reward. How come they were slain so easily?)
Waiting with my breath ehld for the next chapter.
ps- ferion saw the witch-king because of the ring, right? that means he now knows where they are? Wil he and herumor take care of the fool soon? the suspense is killing me!!!!
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Sat Jan 17, 2004 12:55 am
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Hello.
This is Nazgul Dan. I am writing in for Khazar-Khum.
She is very grateful for the reviews!
Wednesday, she was in a minor auto accident which separated her shoulder. Her doctor has ordered
her not to use her right arm for one to two weeks. This is on top of a concussion she received on
New Year's Eve. (Not the best way to start the year. ) The concussion severely limited her computer use.
Unfortunately, the Muses tend to be most insistent when you can't serve them. If this lasts too long, I'm afraid
I'll be taking dictation just to quell them. (The orcs don't type well; and never let a troll near delicate equipment!)
Nazgul Dan |
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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003 Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
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Wed Jan 21, 2004 11:05 pm
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KhazarKhum,
I do hope that you are feeling better. Let me just say that your story just knocked my socks off. I started reading this story out of curiosity. My first thought was - there is no way possible the Witch King of Angmar can be turned into a sympathetic character. And boy oh boy, I was SO wrong. I spent 3 hours on Saturday reading your story from beginning to end. Both Ariashal are the Witch King are such well crafted characters, that I literally expected them to walk off the pages. You have a way with words that allowed me to perfectly visualize the home of the Witch King and all of the other locales you wrote about in your story. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment of this tragically beautiful love story. |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Fri Jan 23, 2004 4:55 am
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Whoah... this is long, all 40 chapters and it ain't fully finished yet!
Damn girl, you can really write ^_~ I'll spare you the boring literary critism crap.
Get well soon and continue writing, I'll be looking foward to future stories you might post. |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue Jan 27, 2004 5:23 pm
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| Score one for the ring of power. |
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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003 Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
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Thu Jan 29, 2004 6:47 pm
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| Woo hoo!!! Another chapter added to one of my all time favorite stories. It was just as wonderful as the previous 40 chapters, but of course like the greedy girl that I am, lil ole me is dying to see what will unfold next. |
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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
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Sat Jan 31, 2004 6:41 pm
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Glad to see you are back! Hope you are on the mend, poppet!
This fic is still to great for words! There is nothing to nitpick over at all! Flawless characterisation!
PLEASE update soon. We needs more Nazgul!
Ever thought of a bulk update? Greedy readers will think they have died and gone to heavan!  |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Sun Feb 01, 2004 3:54 pm
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Thank you all, again, for the kind words.
A bulk upload...you realize that means there'd be a longer wait...
Of course, Ariashal is still driving me, so there may be more by next weekend, if my poor betas can put up with me.  |
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Mon Feb 02, 2004 2:38 am
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| Hope you are feeling better. Another great chapter, the suspense is killing me, when is her beloved coming to save her? Then my brain starts ticking and I think please don't put on that ring Imrahil, it is hard enough that the witch king has to end up being such a bad boy, the thought of her babies becoming tied to that doom is scary. You have me waiting for more.....I would be one of those "greedy readers" if you were to do a bulk upload, I get sad when I realize I am almost finished with the newest chapter. But isn't that part of the fun? Like watching a movie and waiting for its sequel...Thanks again Ilistine |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Mon Feb 02, 2004 2:49 pm
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Absolutely wonderful.
Holding my breath for the return of the witch king. Or his cousing kicking ferion ass in his stead.  |
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