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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue Feb 03, 2004 2:19 pm
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Oh, good grief. And he's Dunedain, isn't he, the putz? However, you've left some clues (intentional??), and I'm wholly expecting some fireworks when the king realizes what has happened. He will not be pleased, methinks. Thanks for another fantastic chapter! |
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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
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Tue Feb 03, 2004 2:50 pm
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How could you do that to us? Nooooo! When is the next installment?
Ferion will SO get his arse whooped! Herumor will save her! Wont he...?
The tension you are building up is superb. Got us all enthralled! |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Tue Feb 03, 2004 3:29 pm
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Oh dear. Now at least I haver the thought that the king got his ring back (hopes fervently) and will kick the arse of that bastard all the way to mordor and back. Not really sure of what will happen to the sonov... who agreed to be Ferion's puppet, but I hope he gets his, too.
And I hope Ariashal gets saved soon! poor girl, she has enough on her shoulders already.
absolutely brilliant. hate you to death. (Kidding) Please feed us again soon, I am dying to know what comes next. |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Tue Feb 03, 2004 4:11 pm
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First, thanks for the reviews & encouragement. Ariashal has been driving me furiously, and I have to watch it before I reinjure my poor shoulder!
Oh, yes, Ferion's puppet is indeed Dunedain, as are both Ferion and Ariashal. Dunedain are quite capable of being miserable SOBs--just look at the history of Gondor, and the endless civil wars of Arnor. |
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Wed Feb 04, 2004 12:51 am
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| You should put a warning "to those addicted to this story it only gets more intense". As I read and realised I was almost done with the chapter I started to get worried you'd leave another cliff hanger and you did. Bravo, I think I will go crazy with waiting, I hope you have more for us soon. This chapter was great! Never thought I would want to see the Witch King kick someone's backside but Ferion is a real creep, where is Herumor, where is her hubby? Someone has to save her, waiting not at all patiently for the next chapter. Ilistine |
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Laereth

Joined: 13 Dec 2003 Reviews: 16
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Wed Feb 04, 2004 1:53 pm
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Wow, I certainly didn't expect that! Nice cliff-hanger Can't wait to see what happens next - this story is definitely one of my favorites and that makes the wait even longer... lol  |
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LillianC
Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Reviews: 2
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Fri Feb 06, 2004 6:28 pm
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| Being one of the many that has enjoyed this story, I though I had better register so I can review it too. Fan fictions with solid characterization and a unique, complex plot are rarely found, but yours is one of them. Thank you for continuing the story even while feeling somewhat under the weather! |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:03 pm
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Oh, yeah... can't wait for the King to kick their urm...behinds!
Her life has never been easy, poor gal. |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Sat Feb 07, 2004 4:47 pm
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| Thanks for all the nice compliments! There is more ready to go--I just need to get it back from my poor, oppressed beta! |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Sun Feb 08, 2004 10:19 am
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| Bravo!!!! |
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