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LillianC
Joined: 06 Feb 2004 Reviews: 2
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Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:54 pm
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Oh my! You are quite adept with the cliffhangers, aren't you? Thanks for updating so soon, but I hope the next update won't be long in coming! |
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Sun Feb 08, 2004 10:51 pm
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| What can I say, I would feel the same way! I hope her king comes to her rescue and soon. Thanks for another fantastic chapter. Ilstine |
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MetuSa
Joined: 10 Feb 2004 Reviews: 2
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Tue Feb 10, 2004 1:20 am
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Whoa! I enjoy reading fanfiction but I'm terrible about reviewing. Since I don't write myself, I feel that it's insulting to judge another who has spent the time to do so. However, I can not withhold any comments...
This story is absolutely fantastic! So much angst, so much romance. As a Tolkien fan, you have created such a wonderful AU that can be readily accepted as another view of Middle-Earth's history. The fact that you've taken the "bad guy" and made him...human? No, so much more than that. I can't wait for you to continue. |
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Ethauriel
Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Reviews: 11
Location: Singapore
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Mon Feb 16, 2004 2:05 am
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I love the concepts and ideas that you introduced in this story!
There's excellent character development, torturously beautiful emotional struggles and overall to boot, a tale exceptionally told! All the characters introduced, even minor supporting ones, lend their part to fleshing out the story and that's great bcos some authors tend to forget about them, making the reader wonder why they were there in the first place. (I love the steadfast and loyal Herumor and Adzuphel totally!)
I empathised with Ariashal for a life cursed, and rejoiced when she found her true love in the Witch-King; indeed, love grows even in the most unlikely places, there is light even in darkness. Reading this touching tale certainly changed my mindset of the Nazgul; I totally agree with Elentari and Papillio about their seemingly lack of effort in killing Frodo at Weathertop or pursuing Arwen and Frodo before Rivendell. (That the Nazgul could show compassion had never occurred to me before! Thanks to Papillio and Elentari for the insight!)
Kudos to KhazarKhum, for your efforts and uncommon perspectives in portraying a different side of the Nazgul; it's easy to embrace the fair and the light, but it takes a wise heart to see that there can also be love and honor in the darkness and the foresaken.
Eagerly looking forward to the future chapters. (I hope you are recovering fine now, KhazarKhum!) |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Mon Feb 16, 2004 3:56 pm
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Thanks and hello!
The next chapter is coming along, and if all goes well y poor betas will have it by the weekend. |
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Wed Feb 25, 2004 9:13 pm
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I have chills! Woohoo, time for the king to kick butt! What more can I say, as always it is fantastic.
Your intro into this chapter "Passages" was perfect. I was not expecting it to happen right off, then there it was, yippee!
Hurry, go write some more!
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Wed Feb 25, 2004 9:31 pm
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| Finally. *relieved* |
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Ethauriel
Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Reviews: 11
Location: Singapore
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Thu Feb 26, 2004 11:52 am
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Yeah, finally!
Can't wait for the next chapter to be up *grins* |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Thu Feb 26, 2004 12:46 pm
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I am so absurdly happy!
Thank you ever sooo much, Kazad, for another brilliant chapter. The way that the Witch king comes back into the tale is fantastic. And the Turabar ghost was simply... sniff. I'm sorry i don't have your descriptive skills, but that comes the closest to what I felt. So touching.
And the Witch King CRIED!!! I'm still on cloud nine over that one. the scene was so natural, from his sneaky appearance, to his humour at her anxiousness and his emotions about her near suicide... Bloody brilliant.
Love you. Seriously. |
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rosesarered

Joined: 20 Feb 2004 Reviews: 12
Location: US of A
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Tue Mar 02, 2004 9:32 pm
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I just found this story yesterday, and I finished it yesterday. I wanted to tell you how much I loved your story after I finished, but I just couldn't find the words. All I can say is, "Wow!" There are no other words. I love the story line (I am a sucker for supposed bad guys who aren't really bad after all), the characters, the lack of spelling errors , just....everything! I am anxiously awaiting more chapters! A question, though: do you know how many chapters it will take for you to 'wrap it up?' Not that I want the story to end, but I was just curious (so I could take my time reading from now on hehehehe). Thank you soooo much for making my Monday! FIVE STARS- I would most DEFINITELY pay for this . |
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