Reviews for "The Cursed Queen of Angmar"

Sat Mar 20, 2004 11:58 pm

Wow- great chapter! If I was Ferion I'd be running for my life! Go WK! bendy smiley face

Sun Mar 21, 2004 1:00 am

Yay, here comes the king to the rescue!!

Sun Mar 21, 2004 7:33 am

Bloody hell! girl , that was amazing. (I'm still bouncing on my chair, but that's irrelevant, right? Very Happy smiley face

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Nice, nice Witch king scene. It sort of reminds me of all those action movies when the good guy comes in at the last possible minute. Only the Good guy is usually jumping in with no chances of getting out and the WK is the WK.
Damn, that was great.
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Mon Mar 22, 2004 6:56 am

I can breathe again now...haaaaaaaa.....I LOVE IT!! I hope the witch-king kicks some serious ferion butt! Twisted Evil smiley face

Tue Mar 23, 2004 5:41 pm

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! WITCH-KING IS GONNA BUST A CAP IN OLD FERION'S PATOOTY!!!!!!
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Thu Mar 25, 2004 1:43 am

Khazar, the suspense is killing me, finally the King has come to claim his wife back and Ferion oh dear, a flaming sword woohoo. Hurry please update soon.

I so love this story.

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Wed Mar 31, 2004 2:01 am

Wonderful!! Ha, Ferion deserved his fate!!! And so does the others... hrrmmm... and knowing how the king really looks like....

Wed Mar 31, 2004 7:41 am

Wow -- lots happening! At first, I was wishing A did die from her wounds so she could be w/her King, but then again, I though "Nah -- maybe it doesn't work that way!" But, I am glad she did finally get to see his face. =)

Good for Ferion & his men -- I wasn't expecting his fate; poetic justice! Well done, and I can't wait to read more; but, the quality is good, so I shall have to. Write on!

Wed Mar 31, 2004 2:30 pm

ruerho: As the King explained earlier, once she dies, he wants her to leave. He'll be able to see her, yes, but not touch her, a fate which he considers cruel.

Ferion just didn't deserve to die. Twisted Evil smiley face

Fri Apr 02, 2004 2:55 pm

God this is brilliant. From the first chapter onward, never have you failed to deliver a brilliant epic, a saga.
There is some wonderful character development too, at first, the King acts as expected, haughty, sinistrer, but courteous. Then you transform him from being the servant of evil, to the misunderstood villain. He is to be pitied, not hated. This is a truely beautiful love story, though all who read it knows there will be tragedy. I can't begin to describe it.
The only critisism I can even think of is that the Kings children are tending to be spoilt. Blue boots, etc. Not everyone can have nice things. And with such a father, Zimraphel is very much a 'Daddy's little princess'.

But onto the good! Ah, this will be a long list. I LOVED the last chapter, where Ariashal finally saw her long lover's image. It really added a new depth to the story.
I love the way the King is cruel in his justice. His punishments are dire, but he is just, and fair. I was a little surprised at Ariashal gave no reaction when he dealt with her brother --blood is thicker than water-- but he got what he deserved, and I'm glad that Ariashal realises that.
She is such a brilliant creation! Realistic, three dimensional, and she doesn't squirm at the supernatural, or corpses. She is not a Mary Sue (how can you be, when your husband is the witch king?), and doesn't change things to how she sees fit. She can accept things as how they are, and inevitable, and though her woes are far from human, we revere her simply for her courage.
Like the part where, as if in a gladiator stadium, she witnessed the day of judgement. She didn't squirm (that much) and critisize.
That's all the praise I can think of for now, love Herumor and Adzuphel, and I implore you to lessen the delay and bring the next chapter soon! I can't believe I didn't find this gem of a story sooner!

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