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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Oct 31, 2006 11:26 am
This is fabulous, Fatey! Jane's crudeness was well and truly caught and most enjoyable to read. But I must admit I'm surprised he knew the word 'chaste' (tee heee!). I especially liked how the rhythm wondered toward the middle, 'cause why would Jane care?
 

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Last edited by NancyBrooke on Tue Oct 31, 2006 11:29 am
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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
Sun Nov 05, 2006 10:51 am
This is just the sort of joyful crudeness I would have hoped for from Jayne's contribution to the world of music. Very nice!
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Fri Nov 10, 2006 7:34 pm
ROFL smiley face
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon Nov 20, 2006 10:17 am
Wow!!!! Yes you did capture Jayne splendidly with this one: his bawdyness, arrogance and macho attitude.. this all shatters to pieces with the past lines where even the mighty Jayne simply craves for approval of his song! Simply brilliant!
 
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Ireth34

Joined: 18 Oct 2006
Reviews: 4
Location: Ontario, Canada
Sat Dec 02, 2006 12:41 pm
Lmao!! That was great, FatiferousPoet!!
 
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:57 am
LMAO. I could totally see this on a gag reel or outtake. You nailed him! (In print, at least. Wink smiley face ) Shiny.
 
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Cheiron

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Reviews: 1
Location: PrancingPony,Behind a Big Pint
Mon Jun 25, 2007 6:19 pm
Brilliant! I just love Jayne!
 
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