Reviews for "Return to Middle Earth"

Mon May 17, 2004 5:49 pm

Glorfindel is so sexy! I wonder if Sinead has any idea how intimate this place was now? Will he act soon, or will he battle the taboos and Morgoth? That muse of yours must be inspired....I need more!!!! Are they "sort of " bonded? He is so protective...This is so fun.

Thanks for the hard work....
Minna Sedh, HisieLome

Tue May 18, 2004 4:03 pm

Oh my god, chiquita. Amazing, and even more so than usual.

If Sinead were the only key, he would have to send her to Mandos; may the Valar forgive him for this one last kinslaying. Yow, it hurts even to read that line. What a hero. *girly sigh*

Glorfindel wondered if the stinker would be so keen if he knew that this elf could take him out in less than ten heartbeats, bound wrists or not. Hell yeah. *girly sigh compounded*

One question (and I'm sure it's there, but I just overlooked it), when does he get his hands unbound? He mentioned bound wrists in that delish line above, but when he and Sinead are tied to the tree, he's stroking her hair to comfort her. When the captors tied them to the tree did they also unbind Glorfy's wrists? Seems like a tactical mistake to me, but I'm all for stupid minions. Wink smiley face

(Also fix spelling of "Celebriam" which should be "Celebrian" and "Alvari’s" which should be "Avari's")

But that whole last scene, on the beach of Alqualonde. Just, wow.

Fri Jun 04, 2004 12:15 pm

Gods, I love this story. I just love all the little details that you have about the elves and the humans lives. Another great chapter.

Sat Jun 12, 2004 11:51 am

Oh how trully wonderous. Elladan wants to compose a new song. He is so musical!

White flowers and posies....Yes, one could get in trouble with the maidens thusly.

Fatherhood has made him soft. LOL!

And last chapter....(just reread)
One last kinslaying...too painful.
Glorfindel could take him out in 10 heartbeats...of couse he could .
Alqualonde was just incredible.

One question: How was she to know exactly how intimate this was? Glorfindel seems so sad; however, does it not seem evident that she would have no real notion of the consequences whereas he could have predicted her responses (and the reason for this taboo with the young) ?

I can't wait for more.

Heads up! Check spelling of hyperlink for chapter name (Whilte ) instead of White....

Minna Sedh, Hisie Lome

Tue Jun 15, 2004 8:04 pm

Oh my goodness! Spent all night reading the Elrohir's Tale and now all day reading this. It is fantastic and wonderful. I am so addicted to this story now. There is so much swimming around my brain, the suspense, the emtions and the intimacies all work perfectly to make this an increcible read!

Oh hurry update soon!

Ilistine

Tue Jun 15, 2004 8:30 pm

Its 2.30am and i just caught up with this fic. DAMN YOU! Where is the Glorfindel smut? You cant just leave it there! Bad Jam!

*cracks whip*

More writing, now! And we havent forgotten about Gil Galad either - thats 2 fics you are hereby threatened with whipping in order to finish! Twisted Evil smiley face

Sun Jun 20, 2004 11:57 am

Poor Glorfy! And now we know of another sin of the western elves....no wander the Avari did not trust these elves.

Sun Jun 20, 2004 5:57 pm

Oh I am so happy you updated, and what an emotional roller coaster ride this is becoming. I had to calm myself a bit, I was so worried they would really hurt Glorfie and I know it isn't over yet.

Well done, again!

Oh please update soon, I am dying to know what is going to happen next!

Keek

Tue Jun 22, 2004 5:53 am

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I know that doesn't count as a serious, constructive review, but that is my reaction to chapter 17. How could you?

Excellent chapter. I am at the edge of my seat. Don't let me fall ... Very Happy smiley face

Tue Jun 22, 2004 4:09 pm

That bit about Neithan's name was slick. You are one patient writer to hold onto a tidbit like that for this long Smile smiley face

And you're almost redeeming Tilthoron in my mind. He's still monumentally stupid, but at least he isn't Bad. Glorfindel, as always, is gah. (yay update!)

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