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didreamsgreen
Joined: 12 Jul 2004
Reviews: 5
Location: CA, USA
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Mon Jul 26, 2004 3:31 pm
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| Miriel! Great story. i loved it when i read it on Hennuth annun and i love the sequel even more. updates soon would be awesome! |
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ilistine
Joined: 27 Sep 2003
Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Sat Aug 07, 2004 12:02 pm
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Marvelous! That new chapter has to be one of the most intense and spellbinding bits of storytelling I have ever read. I am on the edge of my seat, my thoughts are with Sinead but even more so for those who love her. Oh goodness girl, please please don't make us wait too long to have another chapter!
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004
Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Sat Aug 07, 2004 1:00 pm
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OMG! He was with Glorfindel's plait of hair in his hands!!!!  
I hope the Twins and Legolas find them soon and make the bastard suffer!! I can't stand seeing Sinead and Glorfindel under so much pain and sorrow... And Elrohir is always so close to Sinead, but can't find his daughter! what part she will really have in Neithan's plan is making me seat on the edge of my chair, biting my fingernails in anxiety also!
Please, update, soon, I'm dying with all of this wait between chapters 
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Moralanqua
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
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Tue Aug 10, 2004 4:13 am
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You shaved the elf?! OMGWTF? Evil!
This is still good but the pace is starting to lag. Needs to be tightened up and kick started. Neithan is such a baddie but I think you need to flesh him out a little more. Hes starting to read like a stereotype and by now, i would have thought we'd know more about him.
Sinead is doing great. Her evolution is starting now and i can see her becoming a grown up elf! Watch the sue aspects of her powers tho - remember to keep her consistant and to keep those great thoughts and feelings coming. It helps us readers go on the journey with her. |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Reviews: 103
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Wed Aug 25, 2004 3:36 pm
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I've deleted the last chapter. It was a bit of a weak excuse. I'm sorry - although I know where this story is going, I'm having problems with characters cooperating. The real problem is that I am working on too many stories at the one time. I hope you understand. I will finish this as soon as I have time.
Miriel |
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Csele
Joined: 24 Oct 2004
Reviews: 2
Location: Hungary
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Sun Oct 24, 2004 7:18 am
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Glorfindel and Sinead is great, but Thranduil.... Just a bit lovlier, please!!!!
But please dont stop!!! I wait for the next chapter so long!!!!
Mehr kann ich nicht englisch! Schade ich nur jetzt lerne englisch, und ich kann schon lesen, aber nicht so gut schreiben. In deutsch ich kann dich sagen, dass ich die Geschishte sehr gut finde, aber die elven sind ein bisschen so, dass sie wa:re humans (Oh ich schreibe seit 1 Jahre deutsch! )  ops: |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Reviews: 103
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Wed Oct 27, 2004 1:50 am
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Csele,
Elben sind wie Menschen - nur besser. Freue mich dass du liest. Werde mich bemühen weiter zu schreiben - leider habe ich ziemlich ein Zeitdruck...
Und Thranduil soll schöner sein. ... Mmmm - hast du 'in the King's Garden' von JackieS gelesen?
Miriel |
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Csele
Joined: 24 Oct 2004
Reviews: 2
Location: Hungary
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Wed Oct 27, 2004 12:48 pm
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Sprichst du deutsch??? Es ist sehr-sehr gut!!!
So: ok-ok, Elben sind keine Heiligen! Z.b.: Feanor hat eine schlechte Temperature, Galadriel möchte Macht, etc. Aber Tolkien hat gesagt, dass die Elben die physische Dinge nicht so wichtig finden. Aber Deine Elben lieben sex und nicht mit seiner Frau! Es gefallt mir ganz nicht!!! Die Geschichte und einige Character sind so gut, dass es argere mich!
Oh! Die „haven”!!! Sehr-sehr gute Idee! Meine Lieblingsteil, wann Glorfindel und Sinead sind dort! Ich bin darauf gespannt, was sie machen werden. (ich bin sehr romatische..)
Ich habe mit Geduld, nur meiner Neugierige...
„In the King's garden...” Deine Gescichte ist so besser und bedenklicher! |
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Laereth
Joined: 13 Dec 2003
Reviews: 16
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Sat Apr 09, 2005 10:07 am
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I guess it's rather obvious that you've abandoned this story, but it has been in my favourites for so long now that I just want to know for sure... I think it was quite good, very interesting with a lot of potential  If you're not going to work on it anymore, please let us know, so at least I can stop checking and hoping for updates once in a while |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Reviews: 103
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Mon Apr 11, 2005 1:34 pm
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Actually, I've been approached my a lot of people lately to finish this story. I have always planned to come back with it and now I finally have the time (have just completed two other stories I had on the go.)
I'm still here, don't give up on me yet.
And remember... if you read it please review |
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