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Scribe

Joined: 15 Sep 2003
Reviews: 40
Location: Betelgeuse
Tue Sep 23, 2003 10:45 pm

This was really quite lovely. I enjoyed it and liked the foreshadowing. Not to mention the characterizations were very much spot on.
 

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Last edited by Scribe on Tue Sep 23, 2003 6:52 am
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Wed Sep 24, 2003 5:21 am

Lovely piece, great insight into Aragorn, and a deft touch with canon. Well Done, a great read.
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Wed Sep 24, 2003 1:30 pm

Lovely is the word. I wonder if you'll continue? How can 'Strider' get poor Pippin home without causing a fuss? etc.

My only suggestion is that you may have worked a bit too hard on the language. "Unveiling bandages," for example was a bit over the top. Such a simple, straightforward and successful subject might be better served with more simple phrases.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Fri Sep 26, 2003 9:28 am

Wonderful! Your characterization was right on, and i can certainly imagine that sort of situation happening over the long years of the Rangers' watch on the Shire. Except for a few awkward phrasings, very pleasant style, a pleasant read.
Keep it up!
 
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Kementari
Joined: 02 Nov 2003
Reviews: 1
Location: Canada
Sun Nov 02, 2003 8:49 pm

Smile smiley face I really liked this!! I think that was a great idea, and you wrote it very well!! Will there be more, or no? (I hope there will be more...)
 
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Shadow
Joined: 18 Jun 2006
Reviews: 32
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Fri Jul 14, 2006 7:10 am

i reslly liked this idea and enjoyed reading it
very sweet Very Happy smiley face
 
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LuthienTelcontar

Joined: 28 Jun 2006
Reviews: 1
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Fri Jul 28, 2006 9:44 am

I loved it!! Very well written, and portrayed perfectly!
 
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