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Scribe

Joined: 15 Sep 2003 Reviews: 40
Location: Betelgeuse
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Tue Sep 23, 2003 10:45 pm
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| This was really quite lovely. I enjoyed it and liked the foreshadowing. Not to mention the characterizations were very much spot on. |
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003 Reviews: 106
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Wed Sep 24, 2003 5:21 am
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| Lovely piece, great insight into Aragorn, and a deft touch with canon. Well Done, a great read. |
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Wed Sep 24, 2003 1:30 pm
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Lovely is the word. I wonder if you'll continue? How can 'Strider' get poor Pippin home without causing a fuss? etc.
My only suggestion is that you may have worked a bit too hard on the language. "Unveiling bandages," for example was a bit over the top. Such a simple, straightforward and successful subject might be better served with more simple phrases. |
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Fri Sep 26, 2003 9:28 am
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Wonderful! Your characterization was right on, and i can certainly imagine that sort of situation happening over the long years of the Rangers' watch on the Shire. Except for a few awkward phrasings, very pleasant style, a pleasant read.
Keep it up! |
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Kementari
Joined: 02 Nov 2003 Reviews: 1
Location: Canada
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Sun Nov 02, 2003 8:49 pm
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I really liked this!! I think that was a great idea, and you wrote it very well!! Will there be more, or no? (I hope there will be more...) |
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Shadow
Joined: 18 Jun 2006 Reviews: 32
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Fri Jul 14, 2006 7:10 am
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i reslly liked this idea and enjoyed reading it
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LuthienTelcontar

Joined: 28 Jun 2006 Reviews: 1
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Fri Jul 28, 2006 9:44 am
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| I loved it!! Very well written, and portrayed perfectly! |
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