Reviews for "The Oath"

Sun Feb 08, 2004 3:46 am

You have an interesting premise here. But this does need to be beta'd, because there are several grammatical errors that simply knocked me out of the story.

Sun Feb 08, 2004 11:45 pm

Your story has promise. It would be nice to see you continue with the concept of the oath made between the twins and Legolas to always standing by Aragorn's side.

Sun Aug 08, 2004 2:59 pm

I, too, liked the story. Good idea and plot conception. Your writing style moves the events along and is not choppy in any way. On a technical note, I agree with KhazarKhum in that you should get yourself a beta reader. There's some punctuation and grammatical errors, but these are easy enough to fix. Plot and character relationships are always the hardest to tackle in a story (at least they are for me!), and you've handled it nicely. I also think you should continue the story. I say a good effort.

Thu Aug 24, 2006 8:38 pm

Cute! I think it could have used a beta as there were numerous little grammatical and tense errors, but the plot was good.

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