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melz
Joined: 06 Sep 2005
Reviews: 8
Location: London
Thu Dec 14, 2006 4:13 am
I am intrigued - cannot wait for Haldir's reaction to whom he is to escourt. You are able to convey Haldir's weariness and his loved ones concerns. Although, your chapters are short (I'm just greedy - I always want more) you do update frequently - so I should not complain! Thanks for an enjoyable read on a dreary winter's day. I look forward to your future chapters.
 
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
Tue Dec 19, 2006 10:42 pm
This looks like a good story. Can't wait to read more!
 
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WhoaNellie

Joined: 21 Nov 2006
Reviews: 34
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Tue Jan 02, 2007 10:18 am
This is shaping up to be quite the delightful story; looking forward to more.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
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nariel
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Reviews: 21
Location: 
Wed Jan 03, 2007 9:35 pm
I absolutely love this story! I am so glad that I found it. Please update again soon--I can't wait to find out how Haldir reacts to seeing Nurael again.
 
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nariel
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Reviews: 21
Location: 
Wed Jan 10, 2007 3:02 am
Yay! I'm so glad you finally updated. This was really good, though it made me sad that Haldir has such scars from his previous mistreatment. I found that surprising. Anyway, I really like the pacing and how the story is progressing, so please keep up the excellent work and write again soon!
 
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:17 pm
I very much enjoyed this one... please update soon.
 
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nariel
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Reviews: 21
Location: 
Sun Jan 14, 2007 2:06 am
Good chapter, I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon!
 
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pib2cheeks
Joined: 19 Jul 2004
Reviews: 23
Location: Ohio
Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:16 pm
I'm very intrigued! I can't wait to see what Haldir thinks of Nurael joining his patrol. Update soon!

One more thing. Not sure you noticed or maybe it was my computer but you posted the same chapter twice. Just a heads up. Smile smiley face
 
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melz
Joined: 06 Sep 2005
Reviews: 8
Location: London
Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:28 pm
I am still enjoying this story. You somehow manage to write relatively short chapters, which are they are rich in detail and have good characterisation. I think that is good, clever writing.

I loved your grumpy Nurael - Haldir needs some tough love.! Again my only complaint is your chapters are way too short (I am still greedy).

Thanks for the enjoyment
 
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pib2cheeks
Joined: 19 Jul 2004
Reviews: 23
Location: Ohio
Mon Jan 29, 2007 5:40 pm
Yea an update! Haldir definitely needs someone to whip me back into shape, I'm sure our herione will have no problems with that. Smile smiley face Great chapter, update again soon please!
 
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