Reviews for "Song of the Wood Thrush"

Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:12 pm

This is pretty good, though I think it would be much better if it was much longer. It seemed almost rushed that Minaiel would go from kicking Lindir in the crotch to making love to him in a matter of days. Plus, you sort of made the thing between her and Elrohir wanting to have dinner and just sort of left that hanging. I could have went for some jealousy or love triangle bits there.

However, there were some lovely parts in this as well. I liked how you portrayed Arwen, the convincing friend...lol. Your Glorfindel was quite excellent as well for the most part, with the exception of the beginning part, where he seems to almost glad to be thrusting his incapable daughter into the hands of Lindir. It was quite realistic though that he would ignore the gown she wore to the concert as to not draw attention.

Speaking of the concert, the line where Minaiel says that she had attracted "half the strings and the entire percussion section" or something to that manner really made me laugh. I also loved how the cellist faltered when he saw her gaping bossom. LOL!!!

All in all, I really enjoyed this fic! I hope to see more Lindir fics from you!

-P.G.

Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:21 am

This was originally written as a 'fic swap' and was accually twice as long as it was required by the person who set up the swap. Thanks much though for the review!
Caerali Smile smiley face

Sun Sep 28, 2008 4:47 am

Lovely! A perfect story to read on a Sunday morning (well, mid-day, that is). I enjoyed it very much. Smile smiley face

Thanks a lot for sharing.

Thu Mar 03, 2011 3:06 pm

lol very hilarious at parts

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