Reviews for "When Destinies Meet, part 1: In the wake of discovery"
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Shadow
Joined: 18 Jun 2006
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Thu May 17, 2007 7:49 am
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very nice
more please! |
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RilleElen
Joined: 05 Sep 2006
Reviews: 27
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Sat Jun 23, 2007 2:10 pm
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| Come on. Tell me. When are Arwen and Obi-Wan going to have a mushy kissy-kissy scene in which they both confess their love for one another? Better yet, when is the flapping curtain from the fifties going to make an appearance? |
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RilleElen
Joined: 05 Sep 2006
Reviews: 27
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Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:11 pm
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Weehoo!! Yay!! Please keep writing!
Lots of stuff to say. First off, nice reconception of Middle-Earth in Arwen's explanation to Anakin. If that came out of your head, that's....very times ten to the ininity plus good.
Second: Forget Glorfindel with a comlink. How about Gandalf in a podracer? ((Glorfindel with comlink image made me laugh. Very hard to do. Congratulations. :wave )
Third: I was always under the impression that several days were spent in Coruscant, what with the visiting of the Senate and all.....we all know how very, very slow beurocrats are. And that's when they actually want to do something. 'course, it was probably just the way the movie was cut that made me think that. I suppose tana--sorry, that--it could have been a single day in which all that happened.
Anywho, "sehr gut" on the writing always and forever. Keep writing!! (sehr gut: very good, German) |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Mon Aug 13, 2007 4:43 am
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To all my readers:
Forgive the absence of an update! Chapter 15 is being written, as it's longer, the battle, ya know, and I've been away from home for a while. We have approx. 5 chapters to go till the end of part one, and then we're off to part two! |
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RilleElen
Joined: 05 Sep 2006
Reviews: 27
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Fri Aug 24, 2007 4:30 pm
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My only qualm with this chapter is this: wouldn't Obi-Wan have summoned things to him during training at the Jedi Temple? He probably never summoned someone else's lightsaber, though....
Good work, as always! :woot: |
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