Reviews for "Unrepentant, Unforgiven"

Thu Oct 09, 2003 9:22 am

So so good! Loved this story, though I don't normally go for the spiteful revenge stories. I'm glad everyone got what they deserved (and in my mind, I see a sequel starring Eowyn II with Legolas as a teacher). Please write more.

carrie

Tue Oct 14, 2003 2:27 am

You're a good writer!! But you need to be careful messing with these characters.... all those Legolas fans could come and get you!! But, an amazing story and concept!

Wed Oct 15, 2003 12:12 pm

catmorgan said
> So so good! Loved this story, though I don't normally go for the spiteful revenge stories. I'm glad everyone got what they deserved (and in my mind, I see a sequel starring Eowyn II with Legolas as a teacher). Please write more.
>
> carrie
lerouret responds:
Thanks! I had fun writing it. I may have been bitten by another bunny today -- we'll see if anything comes of it!

Fri Oct 31, 2003 3:41 am

Holy cow! That was the best revenge story I've ever read! Great job!

I especially liked the range of emotions that Legolas had: humor, hatred, guilt, sadness, sickness (although I don't think feeling ill is really an emotion). I also never would have expected all that out of Eowyn. I loved how Eowyn could not admit she was wrong; what a consistent character! You were actually able to give us some pyschological reasons why Eowyn acted as she did. Still disliked her, but at least she wasn't some raving, pyschotic lunatic.

Faramir, however, seemed like a lovesick puppy and very forgiving. I would have liked to see the exchange that he had with Eowyn after "the discovery." I'm all about the range of emotions in characters!

But great job! You should be a paid writer!

Mon Dec 01, 2003 1:36 pm

I loved this story - fantastic stuff and very well written. It has bitten me with a bunny of its own (my first, and I am desperately trying to shake the damn thing off, but not succeeding very well) So thanks for inspiring me too!

Tue Oct 12, 2004 8:50 pm

Wow, this is good writing. I just discovered this story today. I like the story--poor little Leggy! Although I have to admit, the idea of our fair-haired and even-tempered friend losing control like that is very sexy, even if Eowyn didn't get to enjoy it much. And I didn't really like his attitude about the daughters of Men. He doesn't know what he's missing! Smile smiley face

I like your characterizations very much. They seem pretty true to character, I think, although I do have a hard time imagining Eowyn so bent on losing it that she'd hold a knife to someone's throat. Again, poor Leggy! Those elves sure do hold grudges.

And I see two bunnies hopping around here: the one catmorgan suggested with Legolas and the daughter and another "alternate ending" type of thing--what if she hadn't forced so much of the philter on him? How would the course of events have changed?

Keep up the good work! Very Happy smiley face

Tue May 10, 2005 6:37 pm

I thought it was very interesting. Such intrigue! I feel sorry for legolas, rape is not something to treat lightly. I am not really an Eowyn fan, but she's usually okay. But in this one, I saw her as a love-starved, stubborn bitchy bitch! Legolas had every right to feel as he did. I hope they can both solve their issues and let go. Poor Legolas! Crying or Very sad smiley face

Mon Mar 10, 2008 9:48 am

Oh my goodness...what a crazy and great story! Your writing is very well done, moving the story along well and keeping it interesting. I was a little hesitant to say how much I liked this story, but it really is worth the read and a good review.

"No Whores!" LOL! That was very funny and tragic at the same time. Good balance there.

Wed Sep 30, 2009 10:43 pm

I enjoyed this story very much, though it dealt with a very difficult theme. I do, however, think there should be more focus on men being raped, or... males being raped, because it happens to them, too, and women can be rapists. So kudos to you for writing this story!

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