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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
Thu Apr 19, 2007 1:36 pm

Aw! Did you have to end it there? Please update soon, I love your story!
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Mon Apr 30, 2007 1:44 am

Wow! Then more more please. This is getting better and better. I can't wait for her to meet her father. Shall I get a really hugh box of kleenix for that? Got to be ready!
 
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tellealan
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Reviews: 18
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Wed May 02, 2007 8:07 am

hello! i was waiting for your latest chappie...and i was thrilled that you posted. reading good stories is a way of mine to relax and forget everything about the real world...i hope that you'll post your next chapters more often, i know that you're a busy, i do understand that. i'm hoping that Elrond will accept Eliann as his daughter with open arms. and Will Owen accompany his dad and his cousin to Middle Earth?
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Fri May 04, 2007 3:28 pm

I do hope Iorlas finds out who his family was and what happened to them. Why he was left with the ranger. And if he is tied to the one from the future daughter that Elrond had. Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter. As soon as I see your posted chapter I jump right on it and read it too fast cause I am so impatient to read. Then all of a sudden it is done! Then I go "Oh no! No more chapter!!" Then I watch the screen like a hawk to catch the next chapter! Thats because I love your stories. Maria
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Mon May 14, 2007 1:32 am

OMG! That was too short. God your stories are fantastic! Oh no got to wait for another post! Uggghhh!
Anyways most of the story had me thinking about autumn and Winter. I love them both. I could fell the discriptions you gave. The smell of the forest. The air! And listening of the animals and birds singing. I could smell the cinnamin too like in the Fall and winter. And apples intermingeling with the cinnamin. It just left me breathless with those season 'scents'.
But know she has met her brothers. Though they don't know she is their sister yet! Keep it coming.
 
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tellealan
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Reviews: 18
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Mon May 14, 2007 6:56 am

yipee!!!! well done for this chapter....will you include what will happened to Eleiann's mom back in Earth?
 
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
Mon May 14, 2007 5:24 pm

Ugh! Evil cruel cliffy,don"t know if I will survive until the next chapter(LOL)
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Mon May 21, 2007 4:33 pm

Finaly she gets to meet her brothers. And they don't even know that they just met their sister. I just hope Lord elrond is still around to finaly meet his daughter. It is what she is hoping for.
I love both your stories. This one and the 'Golden Lion' Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming.
 
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witchywanda
Joined: 13 May 2006
Reviews: 16
Location: Revere, Massachusetts USA
Mon May 21, 2007 11:23 pm

Another great chapter Beverly. This story is moving together smoothly. Really enjoying this one too!
 
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tellealan
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Reviews: 18
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Tue May 22, 2007 9:16 am

yipee! i loved it! when's the next contact...i'm hanging on by my chair for the next chapters! KEEP IT UP! *grins* namarie telle
 
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