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witchywanda
Joined: 13 May 2006
Reviews: 16
Location: Revere, Massachusetts USA
Sun May 27, 2007 7:41 pm

Getting closer to Elrond! Great bit of History of Middle-earth too! Way to go, Beverly! Love this chapter too! Great job!
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Sun May 27, 2007 11:41 pm

Boy (or should I say girl) Both of your stories are soooo good! Golden lion and this one. Iorlas is really showing his worth in his skill as an archer. But I can't wait for the reunion of Elrond and his daughter and wondering is there a connection between Iorlas and Eleiann? Stay tuned everyone!
 
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tellealan
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Reviews: 18
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Mon May 28, 2007 8:21 am

you got me hanging for the next chapters!!!!!!! will eliann and elrond meet finally? hmmm, elrohir can't place or seems famillar, coz they're siblings.=) waiting for your next chapters, Smile smiley face
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Wed Jun 06, 2007 2:56 pm

Ah! Another fine chapter meldir nin (is that right?) Very well written. The way you wrote this is as if you were there retelling the tale or related to one who has passed down the history of the family line. Are you sure you are not a ellith? lol! Any ways as always good story.
 
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witchywanda
Joined: 13 May 2006
Reviews: 16
Location: Revere, Massachusetts USA
Wed Jun 06, 2007 5:38 pm

Just amazing how this story keeps flowing and the reader wants more! Awesome chapter again, Beverly!
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:09 am

Alright! So Iorlas is a Lord. But what will this mean to Lord Elrond. Also I can't wait to see what will happen to the young ellith who will come to know her father and what it has to do with Iorlas. Hmmmm... As always *Great Story!*
 
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tellealan
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Reviews: 18
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Fri Jun 22, 2007 8:15 am

can't wait for the next chapter. =)
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:05 pm

Once again a great story. Your stories are magnificent. This one and *Golden Lion*. What more can I say except *KEEP IT COMING!*
 
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tellealan
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Reviews: 18
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Fri Jun 29, 2007 2:59 am

=) well wittern....i cant wait for it =)
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Thu Jul 12, 2007 2:42 pm

So they may have found the remains of Iorlas parents maybe? I hope they can find out whose remains they are so Iorlas can have closure. But I also hope they can find out what happened to them. I hope you can type faster(lol!) I am getting anxious to read the next chapter. (Just kidding. You don't have to type faster) You really write some really great stories. I love them!
 
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