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Erufaelas

Joined: 02 Sep 2006
Reviews: 13
Location: New Lothlorien
Tue Jun 19, 2007 10:10 pm

Please don't keep us in suspence anymore! A moving and powerful story so far; the only booboo I saw was Haldir's brother is named Orophin, not Oropher.
 
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Anie
Joined: 30 Sep 2004
Reviews: 47
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Sat Jun 23, 2007 7:35 pm

Brilliant. Your really gripping your readers. This story has somuch depth. I can't wait to read the rest.

Please update soon!
Very Happy smiley face
 
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Erufaelas

Joined: 02 Sep 2006
Reviews: 13
Location: New Lothlorien
Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:24 pm

Beautiful chapter!
Love how Brenauth is slowly starting to FEEL again....but still retaining some of her iron.
Got a bad feeling about exactly WHO is teaching these orcs elven technique.
Ecthelionn and Glorfindel's deaths in the flashback scene tore my heart out!
The plot is thickening! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
 
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sarasara
Joined: 04 Jul 2007
Reviews: 1
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Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:47 pm

I *rarely* write reviews, but after your last chapter, I just had to say how much I am LOVING this story! I'm so glad that she finally had a good experience!

PLEASE keep writing! I have to know what happens to everyone! And what about the suitor? Is he gone? Have we met him yet? I can't wait!

You've got me hooked! Post more!
 
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gettimusprime
Joined: 07 Jun 2007
Reviews: 2
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Fri Jul 06, 2007 12:47 pm

The more you post, and the more I read, the more I love this story. I really enjoy your writing style, and the variety of scenes you've included, like the battle scenes, the flashbacks, and the romantic interludes.

As for the plot itself, I'm having a great time guessing what is going to happen and trying to figure out the next twist. (I have a pretty good guess but...)

Thanks for all the hard work! Keep it up!
 
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Anie
Joined: 30 Sep 2004
Reviews: 47
Location: 
Tue Aug 28, 2007 7:54 pm

Fantastic! I'm on the edge of my seat. Every chapter brings G & B a little bit closer yet they still haven't met face to face. You always manage to pull in loads of different twists and turns. Really gripping. I can't wait to read on.

Please update soon. Smile smiley face
 
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
Sun Sep 02, 2007 2:24 am

This is a wonderful story! I have to download to read due to a really bad dial-up connection here in OZ so I have now read the 18 chapters and wait with bated breath for more. Will it be Haldir or Glorfindel for the Lady? I'd be thrilled with either one.
 
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Anie
Joined: 30 Sep 2004
Reviews: 47
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Sun Oct 14, 2007 7:02 pm

Please don't stop now. Thing's were just starting to heat up...i keep checking to see if you have updated. I'm really looking forward the reading on..........please update soon. Smile smiley face
 
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Erufaelas

Joined: 02 Sep 2006
Reviews: 13
Location: New Lothlorien
Sat Nov 03, 2007 9:09 am

Wooohooo! Can't wait!
 
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Anie
Joined: 30 Sep 2004
Reviews: 47
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Mon Nov 05, 2007 7:34 am

oh i got soooo excited when i had a little update in my 'watched stories' section. Then I opened up 'Chapter 19' and found out we may have to wait until December??? humf *sulky pout*

Sigh

Well, its definately worth the wait!! Smile smiley face
 
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