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ladyisis
Joined: 03 Sep 2006
Reviews: 27
Location: UK
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Wed Jul 04, 2007 5:04 pm
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| Another great chapter. I want to say update update update lol but that would be cruel of me, I know you are so busy! We can't help but want more! This is going great and is well paced. xxx |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Wed Jul 04, 2007 5:12 pm
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| That was great! It begins. Her journey into the past. I can't wait for the next chapter. But please don't knock yourself out or you'll get sick again! I know how it is when you want to get it done but things just get in the way. That's life for you. Always throwing something on the smooth rode your on to trip into. Just take it easy and write super fast!!!(Ha! Ha! Just kidding) Till the next chapter! |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Wed Jul 04, 2007 5:14 pm
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| By The Way Happy Fourth of July(Bang, Zoooomm, Bang!) Hehe! Thats suppose to be a firework. LOL! |
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sofia
Joined: 28 Mar 2004
Reviews: 78
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Fri Jul 06, 2007 7:59 am
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Well... it was a long chapter but (since I'm such a glutton) I found it short. I want MORE! lol.
I think Alice should go to Germany and get her cousin to bring her to the place where the castle comes out. I think that would lead to some interesting things.
She's having doubts about Logan... I can already tell how that relationship ends....
Keep it up hon! |
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ladyisis
Joined: 03 Sep 2006
Reviews: 27
Location: UK
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Sun Jul 29, 2007 4:51 pm
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| I think sofia and myself should start a support group cos we are soooo addicted to this lol. Going really well - I say that everytime! (But it's true) Can't wait for next chapter xxxx (PS Brett got his 1st tooth this week! yeyyyyy! The lil bugger bit me in the toe! lol) |
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sofia
Joined: 28 Mar 2004
Reviews: 78
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Sat Aug 04, 2007 4:50 pm
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I agree with ladyisis- we should start a group!
Oh my goodness, hun, this chapter was really good. just what I needed.
I liked the dream. ' “I’ve always wanted to bring you here, but you wouldn’t come.” He smiled at the recollection. “You did not consider it fitting.”
“And what makes you think I find it fitting now?” '- love that.
I wonder what Johan will say/ do if Alice does contact him. Right now I'm hoping that she'll go back to Germany and have Johan bring her back to the spot and even though adults can't see it Alice will be able to.
I want the next chapter out later today! I can only think that when this story is over (please never let it end!) I'll be having withdrawal symptoms.
keep it up!
your gluttonous friend. |
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sofia
Joined: 28 Mar 2004
Reviews: 78
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:29 pm
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Oh wow. Things are getting intense. I wonder, if Alice took sleeping pills would her sleep still be troubled by Legolas? But then again its Legolas, and even if he's angry and jealous- he's still pretty darn sexy. And that makes for some nice dreams.
I really cannot wait until chapter 7.
Keep it up hun! |
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Shaylee7
Joined: 11 Jan 2006
Reviews: 18
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:57 pm
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| Great Chapter - Legolas almost makes jealousy seem like an attractive quality. Looking forward to what happens next! |
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Rapunzel
Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 21
Location: Boston, MA
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 10:10 pm
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| Yeeeeee- ouch. Legolas is is getting aggressive. And it's...kinda sexy. But a little stalkerish. I hope she remembers something about him soon. |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 11:39 pm
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| Aww Geez! How do I feel? How do I feel? Don't leave me hangin'! That is how I feel! Really great story though! I feel her dilemma. But I hope she can find him before it is too late for both of them. Keep up this good story. |
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