Reviews for "Sleeping Beauty"

Thu Oct 29, 2009 3:37 am

Ah yes - I was in that street last week. The one in York, not the one in Paris...

York is just the perfect place for 'Greyham' to live and I will now expect to bump into him at the market some time!

Thu Oct 29, 2009 5:24 pm

Yay! You're writing again!

Sat Nov 14, 2009 7:00 pm

Meep! Well that's a pretty major league last line!

Sat Nov 14, 2009 9:39 pm

Finally! Greyham finally shows himself. Now to just get the two together. What! she has to die? Awww man. Well get on with it so they can be together. The suspense is killing me. hehehehe.

Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:48 am

Somehow my earlier questions about the pendant are all irrelevant now haha! Curiosity killed the cat they say.
I'm fascinated with this story, and I can't wait for more. Poor Alice though ... I wish she wouldn't have to die. But if that's the only way ...
And Greyham. Hm. Did the wizard die I wonder? My guess is he's still smoking that pipe xD
Great job!

Fri Dec 18, 2009 4:44 am

Ahahaha let's turn Johan into a frog and see if he believes Gandalf then xD I so totally knew it was him all along. Great chapter! Although if I may comment, sometimes the way Alice speaks is a bit old-fashioned for modern day. Like she doesn't use abbrevations (can't, don't, etc). But if she's a modern woman my guess is she'd use them a lot? Especially if she's American? That's the only thing that sounded a little off in this chapter Smile smiley face

otherwise, great show, can't wait for the next one!

Thu Mar 18, 2010 4:53 pm

It is always so good to see a new chapter - thank you.

Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:55 pm

Yes, yes, yes!! Another chapter. MIssy, you sure know how to torture someone. Well at least the poison is not killing her in that awful way. Pain and blood......and blood and pain.
But she is getting closer. I mean they are in the same room together in her apartment. Now to just be able to talk to him and straighten things out......Then drink his blood. I bet you elf blood is sweet and pure like they are! Please, please, please......don't make us wait. Hehehe

Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:22 am

Arghhh noo!! You can't leave it there!! Post asap please!! Loving this story! Smile smiley face

Fri Mar 19, 2010 9:51 am

Ahhh another cliffhanger! Well, I have to say it's a good one (as usual) and can't wait for more! I think I saw a typing mistake somewhere towards the end, in the description of Alice trying to break through the 'wall', but I'm not sure. Anyway, good job Smile smiley face

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