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elinbengtsson
Joined: 20 Feb 2007 Reviews: 8
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Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:20 am
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| This chapter was lovely, I really hope you will find time and inspiration to finish this story. I found the way you expressed Legolas's longing and pain very touching. Keep up the good work, I can't wit too read what happens next. |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:53 pm
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Oh this chapter has me riveting! So close but yet so far! Gasp!
You know I started reading this chp and realized that I missed something. For some reason I did not know chp 22 was out and started reading that. I came back to chp 23 and boy o boy. I am so excited I don't know what else to say! You are a really good writer I must say. I think THIS story THIS SLEEPING BEAUTY will be my all time favorite out of all the sleeping beauty stories I have ever read, heard, or seen. Next chp PLEASE. |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Thu Jun 03, 2010 2:42 am
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So sorry to hear that life has not been good for you.
Thank you for this chapter - how like both Legolas and Gandalf that Gandalf knew it would be best to keep from Legolas that he would not be able to go to Valinor until the couple were reunited. |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:37 am
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I'm sorry to hear about all that's happened *hugs* hope things are better now.
Thank you for this chapter, it really worked like a charm after all the wait xD Very in-character with everyone. I could still see some slightly archaic/academic speech from Alice (meaning no abbreviations) but nowhere near as much as before, so good job on that! Can't wait for the next chapter  |
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elinbengtsson
Joined: 20 Feb 2007 Reviews: 8
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Thu Jun 03, 2010 2:52 pm
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| Oh come on! I think that's the cruelest cliff hanger you have ever left us with. Haha but I did enjoy the chapter, a little short perhaps, but then I always want it to go on. I am looking forward to the next chapter, and preparing myself for a wait. I know how busy and stressful it can get while studying. |
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neutrino18girl
Joined: 22 May 2010 Reviews: 3
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Sat Jul 10, 2010 3:53 pm
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| wow. you have to update. this is like one of the most amazing, original stories I've ever read. I started it a few hours ago and I couldn't stop reading it! please please please update! I'm dying to know what happens next! |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
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Tue Aug 03, 2010 1:13 am
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Ah, another cliff hanger eh? Well better late than never I say. I'm glad Legolas hasn't lost his touch in annoying Alice xD Update when you can, I'm looking forward to the next chapter  |
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neutrino18girl
Joined: 22 May 2010 Reviews: 3
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Wed Aug 04, 2010 11:01 am
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| oh please please please update quickly! You can't leave it right here! oh, you're evil! I wanna know what will happen! pretty please update soon? very soon? |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon Aug 30, 2010 6:46 am
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Oh what a wonderful chase through the Venice of her mind - and what a climax to the chase!
I am so looking forward to the end - when I will go back around and start at the beginning again. |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:54 pm
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Ahhh, brilliant. Very very good Finally, these two got what they wanted! Looking forward to the ending  |
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