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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Nov 13, 2007 10:01 am
A provocative exploration of this relationship. The way you kept the characters identities at first hidden really brought out the shared aspects of this parting, this sibship, and others. Well done.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Nov 13, 2007 11:31 am
The moment seemed rushed. Not that I'd want to sit around and listen to their interior monologue angst for seventeen pages or anything, but still... a bit rushed. Nevertheless, I love this moment in the Tolkien mythology, the moment when the twins part for ever, and the moment when Elrond determines that he will always watch over his brother's children. I think your short descriptions of both brothers were right on. Thanks for this peek. It was bittersweet.
 
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Nessa
Joined: 19 Sep 2006
Reviews: 8
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Wed Dec 12, 2007 3:28 am
I like this tale on the choice of Elros. It is interesting how you detailed their farewell and added a love that Elros left behind.
 
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