Reviews for "Left Behind"

Tue Jan 29, 2008 12:34 pm

What's "the Trilogy"? Do you mean Tolkien's "trilogy"? Groovy. I'm interested in reading something from Faye's point of view, as it seems this story is going to be focused mainly on her. Now two people have talked about her and described her, but I still don't feel like I've met her. I'm liking the threads you're setting up, plot arcs introduced, though the pronouns are a little confusing. Who was the man in the last scene with the gurgling sound? Is the "body" discussed in chapter 2 the woman in mud at the end of chapter 1? Is she someone from modern times magically transported to Middle-earth? Was her arrival part of the attack described at the beginning of chapter 1? I'll be interested in seeing how all these pieces fit together. (Which is the mark of a good story: making your readers care.)

Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:32 pm

Still on the lookout for new chapters. Smile smiley face

If you have something done and are just waiting on a beta, feel free to send it my way. I'm that interested in reading the new stuff. hee. Also, I just noticed (or rahter, noticed again) that your first line is very like the first like of Tad Williams's first "Otherland" book. Are you a Williams fan?

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