Reviews for "Just...Adequate"

Tue Feb 26, 2008 10:34 am

I love it that Oropher knows exactly what's going on from the first. And Cuilbanneth is utterly charming. Hooray for ubiquitous dwarf cohorts! Have you written about Thranduil? You should. Your Thranduil characterisation here is yummy. In fact, all the details in this story work nicely, especially the technical skylight bits. They move the story along, get it out of the characters' heads, and show off a little nifty research (good on you!). Finally, I want to congratulate you on the story's structure. You could have drawn it out to three or four 2,000-word chapters, but it might have languished. This pacing was swift and easy on the brain. I enjoyed it very much.

Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:35 pm

I read this before you posted, and I will say the same thing I said then. YOU had my attention the entire way through, and I loved the dwarves. Clever story.

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Reviews for "Just...Adequate"