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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:52 pm

What a thoroughly original meeting! Am interested in why she needed the black arrow, now. And why did she punch him? Hope to see a new chapter soon.
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:19 pm

Oh brilliant, Brilliant! I'm so excited to see this. I absolutely loved Pitfalls, and this looks to be just as wonderful. I will be awaiting the next installment with bated breath.
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Thu Apr 10, 2008 11:19 pm

I'd love anything that's about Haleth and the elf. ^_~

Keep up the fabulous work! Smile smiley face
 
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:05 pm

Well I left a review on SOA I might as well here,right? Haleths drowning was really well written if fact I think I was getting panicky too, thank gods for Inglor, as for the punch I knew she was gonna do something to him,it's just her way. Hope the arrow was worth her life! Deb the Imp
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:52 am

I know it's only been a few days, but might I hope you're working on chapter 2? Smile smiley face (Sorry for being a pest.)
 
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lissaselves

Joined: 28 Dec 2007
Reviews: 42
Location: Right here!
Fri May 23, 2008 5:14 pm

Oh, this is very, very good! Look forward to finding out why the arrow is worth risking death by drowning.
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Fri May 23, 2008 5:17 pm

Wonderful! This story has so much intensity. I love the characters and their perceptions. I'm on the edge of my seat now. I look forward to finding out what happens next.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Wed May 28, 2008 1:13 pm

She certainly is persistent, isn't she? I like her. I want to know more about her. And this: "unalloyed tranquility" .. How utterly elven. Similarly "great age and complete innocence." I'm so glad you've updated. I was waitin' on this one. Smile smiley face
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:09 pm

Excellent! The story continues. I can't wait to see who wins the battle of wills here.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Oct 14, 2008 2:16 pm

Is he really? Then how did he .... oooh. This is a good mystery. Am itchin' to know more!
 
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