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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:41 pm

Oh, my! I seem to have missed a few chapters, so I got to read three new ones all at once!

Life is good.... Wink smiley face

So, Haleth is not her real name, like Inglor isn't his (main) name? Well, that's interesting.... Now you have me wondering even more about who she is!

I love how we see the beginnings of their life and travels together. She is wary, but, hey, if I were rescued and then nursed back to health by a blond Elf-lord, I wouldn't complain! hee hee hee

I love your Haleth and Inglor, Haleth! And look forward to whatever you write about them.

Thanks for the lovely gift!

- Barbara
 
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006
Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
Mon Dec 22, 2008 1:26 pm

What a wonderful early x-mas present! I am loving this story as much as I did Pitfalls. I can see the beginnings of their future relationship and it promises to be filled with the delightful humor I have come to expect from you.

I'm looking forward to the next installment.
 
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snowdrop
Joined: 29 Oct 2004
Reviews: 32
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Sat Jul 18, 2009 11:00 pm

I haven't been on the site in some time, but was delighted to see that you had written this story after that long hiatus.... but does the 7 months since an update mean this piece is now on standby? it's a great story, i love that there's a little introduction to the mysterious initial meeting of haleth and inglor, and, as always, your writing is a pleasure to read. please continue!
 
Author's replied on Sat Jul 25, 2009 5:32 pm
Thank-you for reviewing The Finder. This story was meant to be a stand alone but you're not the first person to mention that it isn't actually complete. At the time it seemed to have an ending; at least that's how it seemed to me. Looking at it again, I left an awful lot of things unresolved. My only (poor) excuse is that I wanted to actually have a finished (well, sort of) story rather than another 100,000+ word unfinished epic taking up space on my hard drive.

I'll see what I can do to push things at least a little further along. I have a few ideas. I'm just not sure how to present them.

Thanks again for taking the time to review.
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