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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue Nov 04, 2008 2:15 pm

Firstly, congrats on your first posting! Very Happy smiley face

Now, what an intriguing -- no, simply gripping -- start! I think you can easily imagine how many questions fill my mind, like: What happened? Who is she? and so on. The little "TBC" at the end of the chapter gives me hope that I will find out. I'll be certainly watching your story.

This chapter was chilling. What struck me in particular was the calmness of the surroundings confronted with this grim realization that something really violent and cruel occurred.

Well done. Consider me hooked, and, please, continue!

All the best,
Binka
 
Author's replied on Tue Nov 04, 2008 2:28 pm
Why, thank you Robinka! I am glad that my story has caught your interest, and hope that the following chapters will hold as much intrigue as the first.

I very much appreciate your review. It is very inspiring, Smile smiley face
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