Reviews for "'Til Death Do Us Part"

Sat Jul 02, 2011 12:21 pm

I'm glad to have the opportunity to catch up with Haleth and Inglor. They seem to be at cross purposes again. I love these two characters and hope they will eventually figure out their aggression is nothing more than frustration. Thanks for the update.

Sat Jul 23, 2011 1:51 pm

I loved the conversations between Haleth and Ecthelion. But oh, poor Haleth - her emotions are stretched in so many directions.

Tue Nov 08, 2011 9:03 pm

Yeah another chapter! Poor Haleth is still so confused and her memories still jumbled. I wonder how Haleth knows Angrod. This should be quite interesting. And what is happening to Inglor? Clear more diffuse light? Could he be fading?

Wed Nov 09, 2011 3:28 am

The more you tell us of Haleth's background the more fascinating it becomes. But I am hoping that Inglor is alright - I can see that, in the way Elves perceive time, it is not that long since they arrived but I do hope they will get a little time together to actually 'talk' sometime. Her silver ring that he gave her - I do wonder if anyone amongst her new-found family have asked her about it as, to me, it tells of a real commitment and I do wonder whether someone has pointed this out to her - or whether they assume she knows, or think that, in her 'delicate' mental state at present, it would be best not to draw attention to it.

Wed Nov 16, 2011 12:23 am

Poor Inglor! Please tell us he is not going to fade? Thanks for the update! I certainly hope haleth wakes up and smells the limpi before she loses the love of her life.

Thu Dec 29, 2011 8:04 am

Another tangled mess unveiled. Very well written chapter! One must say that these two are well made for each other, though, I have a great deal of sympathy for the constant visits from Mr. Murphy. Here I was thinking that I, alone, had a doomed, personal attachment to the damn Irishman Razz smiley face

Thu Dec 29, 2011 9:57 am

I don't blame poor Haleth one bit.

I would give the same reaction.

She'll get over it, I'm sure. She's too used to having Inglor around to not get around to it eventually. ^_~

Sat Feb 04, 2012 11:14 pm

My goodness you're such a tease! I was so looking forward to the confrontation between Inglor and Haleth (which will hopefully lead to some making up Razz smiley face

), and there you are inserting another twist... Smile smiley face

I'm looking forward to you next installment, please update soon! <3

Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:19 am

Ah - I wonder if this latest incident has anything to do with that glimpse of a far distant mountain top when she spent the day with Ecthelion?

Fri Feb 10, 2012 7:50 pm

So glad to finally catch up with Haleth and Inglor here, and that you're posting regular updates! There can never be too much H & I, as far as I'm concerned. Haleth's sulking tickles me, and Finarfin having to delve into millenia of childraising memories to realize that she's pouting, is funny. I like your take on Finarfin in this story, and can empathize with his pique with the Telerin ambassador for needling him with the first kinslaying. Elves and mortals are alike in that stead sometimes, aren't they - no matter how much one atones, some like to dwell on old grievances. This edit really reads well, I like the way you fleshed it out more, especially making Finarfin more empathetic. He certainly has a tough job, especially since Inglor's return with Haleth in tow. As always, looking forward to more. Write on!

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