Reviews for "'Til Death Do Us Part"
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 5:23 am
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| Inglor is so sweet in his worry. Finally, he and Haleth are actually communicating. Wow! THey rescued Idril! A lot of people including Elrond are going to be very surprised. Hey Valar? Why the enchantment. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Apr 14, 2014 5:33 pm |
Hello Athena568.
The enchantment was put into place in the First Age when none of the Elves who had gone back to Middle-earth were allowed to go back to Valinor. The islands are set between Middle-earth and the Blessed Realm. Tolkien mentions in the Silmarillion that anyone who set foot on one of the Enchanted Islands fell asleep and remained asleep until the end of the world, which I interpreted as the enchantment staying in place. Er.....I hope that makes sense!
Thank-you for the review.
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jimi
Joined: 10 Apr 2007
Reviews: 3
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Fri Apr 25, 2014 6:25 am
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| Thank you for posting this story so frequently lately, you've saved many of my Monday mornings! Now this chapter truly gave us some more hints to Inglor's identity. If he is who I think, Haleth is so going to freak out... I'm just wondering if there would be some reason for Inglor to refer to himself in third person? Also I'm wondering if Haleth has truly understood at all how old she herself is, or does she just avoid thinking about it? Anyway, I love the mystery (mysteries) and you really bring these characters into life with your writing! |
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| Author's replied on Sat Apr 26, 2014 7:53 pm |
Hello Jimi
I'm glad the story could brighten up a dreary Monday morning.
Did Inglor refer to himself in the third person? I'll have to go back and reread. I try to catch all of the grammatical and spelling errors before posting but I'm not always successful.
Haleth does seem to have a confused sense of time.
Thank-you for the review. |
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Adonis
Joined: 26 Dec 2013
Reviews: 7
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Mon May 05, 2014 2:54 pm
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| Thank you for your frequent updates. My favourite couple are in a diplomatic incident yet again! I love it! You have created beautiful characters. They are very entertaining. Thank you, again. |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 12, 2014 8:16 pm |
Hello Adonis
Both Inglor and Haleth seem to have a talent for annoying powerful people. It used to seem it was just Haleth but Inglor does just as well; people hide it when he irritates them.
Idril isn't much better. Aman is going to be a far more interesting place with the three of them around.
Thank-you for taking the time to review. It's really good to know that a few people are still reading and enjoying the story on this site. |
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Adonis
Joined: 26 Dec 2013
Reviews: 7
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Tue Jan 13, 2015 2:36 am
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| Welcome back and thank you for the new chapters. What are you preparing for them this time I wonder! |
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Annye
Joined: 07 Feb 2008
Reviews: 8
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Thu May 14, 2020 4:31 am
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| More, please, please, please, please? |
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