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napali
Joined: 04 Apr 2008
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Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:28 am
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Beautiful chapter. I liked very much your description of the aftermath of the rescue, the beginning of healing. And I like the fact that you do not insist on the relinquish of the kingship to Nolofinwe. I'm still not sure if I guessed right the reason behind Findekano's pain, but I supposed it will become clearer as the story develops. Looking forward to the next chapters (and the wedding "g" . Thank you. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:17 am |
Thank you! I am very glad you're liking it so much. I'm not saying anything about the wedding - just that things, around these two, are never very easy.  |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
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Tue Aug 03, 2010 1:34 am
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Poor Findekáno; he really has his pain cut out for him it seems. But as always a lovely chapter; I noticed one or two grammatical mistakes in the middle, but nothing major, and they were definitely overlooked in the whole of the chapter. I can't wait to see how you describe Maitimo's healing.  |
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| Author's replied on Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:24 am |
| Thank you! Glad you're liking it. This chapter took so long I didn't reread properly before posting - well, glad the mistakes didn't spoil it for you. I'll update asap. |
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napali
Joined: 04 Apr 2008
Reviews: 19
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Sun Aug 22, 2010 11:24 pm
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| Hi. Welcome back. Again a beautiful written chapter. I must say that I am a little dissapointed with the promise not to wed until happier times will come. Since we all know what Maitimo's life is going to be like, it means that they will never marry and I think it's a pity and he deserved a lot better than he got. Other than that, great chapter. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:11 am |
Hi! Thanks for the welcome back, and I am very glad you liked the chapter.  As for the marriage, let us not put limits to providence: as Lacuna Coil would put it, 'vows are spoken/ to be broken'... I'll update asap! |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
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Mon Aug 23, 2010 11:52 am
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| Lovely new chapter, I really enjoy the realism you incorporate into your story but now their ways part ... on we go! I noticed one or two spelling mistakes, but other than that all was good. Can't wait to read more. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:12 pm |
| Glad you liked it! Yes, a couple of mistakes always escape my nets...hope they don't take too much from the chapter. And yes, the way parts. But one can always visit, right? Hope you'll enjoy new updates! |
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napali
Joined: 04 Apr 2008
Reviews: 19
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Wed Sep 29, 2010 10:28 pm
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| Hi. Beautiful description of the hill and of the fortress. And I love Silme's chamber (I wish I would have lived there). I think Maitimo is too harsh on himself, he really doesn't need a constant reminder of Angband on the horizon (you meant Angband, right? Utumno was destroyed by the Valar a long time ago). I also love Maitimo's determination in learning how to fight with his left hand (we know what a great warrior he will become later). And I'm sorry that they showed such restraint, maybe the years will change their minds "g". Wonderful writing as always. Looking forward to the new chapters (hopefully after a short wait "g". Safe journey to your destination. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Sep 30, 2010 3:31 am |
| Thank you! Aaaahh Utumno. Right. Angbad. Ahem. *goes hiding* So, so glad you'ìre liking it. I dearly hope I can update soon... |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Sep 30, 2010 7:37 am
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| Yay for an update! Of course we totally understand about the original work and moving - hope all goes well! Loved this new chapter, echoing some earlier thoughts Silme's chamber is amazing. Wish I could have one like that too Looking forward to the next update! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Sep 30, 2010 11:42 am |
| Thanks for understanding! I love writing original fiction of course, but I love being back in Middle-earth as well. Also, glad you liked Silme's chamber. Not that the author herself wouldn't like a little room like that... |
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