I'm up to chapter 6. This is a very creative story! I read a lot of fan fiction and this is the first take on the princess/queen left behind in the war of the Alliance. The only jarring note is your use of modern slang like 'heck', 'darn' etc. The sentences stand well without them and the prose is otherwise quite lyrical.
Thanks for a good story.
Author's replied on Thu Feb 19, 2015 2:35 pm
Thank you so much for Reading and reviewing I Guess my Language some times do get a bit too modern, the problem is that i sometimes read the books Tolkien made and then i start using the same type of Language, which is rahter olldfashioned, for a while. Very glad you have taken the time to review