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Silreth
Joined: 07 Jun 2003
Reviews: 15
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Sun Jan 04, 2004 9:26 pm
I love this story. It made me cry and laugh. Please hurry and write more.
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Mon Jan 05, 2004 9:13 am
You've succeded in making my heart sadden by the poor child's fears. Please be 'hasty' and write more! Very Happy smiley face
 
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Tue Jan 06, 2004 10:12 am
A difficult topic which you are handling with great sensitivity and poise. Well Done, your characters are engaging, your dialogue rings true and the pacing is believable. Loved the flowers in the hair. Am assuredly looking forward to more!
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Mon Jan 12, 2004 11:10 am
A fitting conclusion. =)

Kinda depressing, but it;s really good!

Read mine too, kay? Very Happy smiley face
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Fri Jan 30, 2004 8:39 pm
Aww, sweet! I love the idea of Rumil and Orophin as uncles-- you know they'd be fun ^__^ Anyways, update soon! This is such a good story... *drools* more!
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Tue Feb 03, 2004 9:49 am
"Do you think Lord Celeborn is sexy?"

Priceless... simply priceless!! Rofl!!!

Heheh... lookin' forward to more!
 
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NiennaNir

Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Reviews: 9
Location: Caras Galadhon
Fri Feb 06, 2004 10:30 am
This is just the most heartwrenching and hopeful fanfic I have ever read. I absolutely adore it. You handle the subject with so much honesty and your writing style brings the charracters to life so beautifully. Looking forward to more.

Nienna
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Mon Feb 09, 2004 6:23 pm
*big puppy-dog eyes* More?
 
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Leilana
Joined: 19 Jan 2004
Reviews: 56
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Tue Feb 10, 2004 8:07 pm
You have a very difficult and sensitive subject and treated it with respect and honesty. The reactions of the brothers and other elves when they discovered her past broke my heart and touched my spirit. The obstacles she and Haldir have to go through to gain trust, respect and love are reality and I think you captured it very well. I am glad, however, that there is more humour in the more recent chapters, and I laughed out loud at the 'nincompoop' and 'sexy' comments! Great story!
 
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Leilana
Joined: 19 Jan 2004
Reviews: 56
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Thu Feb 12, 2004 7:07 pm
enter legolas greenleaf...and i didn't think it could get much better...silly me!
i love the story though and i hope you write more after it is done...i'd love to read them.
 
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