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BittenBuggy

Joined: 27 Dec 2003
Reviews: 93
Location: Busy Being the Queen Of Everything.. And Trying to Catch the Yoda-Copter
Wed Jan 14, 2004 3:58 pm
Aww... She's so cute! I love your descriptions, can't wait for an update...
 
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
Wed Feb 04, 2004 7:44 am
I fully agree with BittenBuggy! So, so sweet! Please update soon! I wonder what Legolas will do... hmm... Wink smiley face
 
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GoddessVendie
Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: California
Wed Feb 04, 2004 9:14 pm
This is such a cute story! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out Very Happy smiley face
 
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
Thu Mar 11, 2004 2:54 pm
This sounds like it's going to be a delightful tale! You do have a nice prose style although you might want to just be a little more careful with your spelling- sight and not site, for example. Also I like the idea of Gandalf cussing but I doubt "for God's sake" is a suitably Middle-Earth-like one...try 'for Illuvatar's sake' or perhaps one of the Valar.
One gigantically huge thing I love is how you haven't just shoved Gimli off to one side as 'old and therefore uninteresting' the way so many fanfics set within the Fellowship do. From the way this first chapter's going it looks like you've got the characters set out for all of them and they're all going to have an active, participating role in the plot. Like it, and like it muchly!
Gosh, what a long and waffly review. I do beg your pardon. To summarise: I enjoyed this little bit very much and would very much like to read some more. So write some. Now. Or else. Please?
Pewtty please with Legolas on top?
 
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linweseregon

Joined: 16 Nov 2003
Reviews: 43
Location: North of the River and south of the Sun
Sun Mar 14, 2004 11:08 am
Hurry up and update - please.
 
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TrissMarigold

Joined: 12 Mar 2004
Reviews: 27
Location: the land of dreams
Mon Mar 15, 2004 2:24 pm
Lovely story! I like the way you decribe them all, they're totally in character.
And your OFC is so cute Smile smiley face
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Please update soon, I can't wait to see what will Legolas do.
 
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Mija
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 16
Location: 
Wed Mar 24, 2004 3:11 am
I really hope that you update this soon, it's so delightful.
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Wed Apr 07, 2004 3:58 pm
How adorabel this is so far! *vbg* I can't wait to see how she embarrasses Legolas next. *wicked grin*

Please do come back and update this soon? Very Happy smiley face
 
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Sat Apr 10, 2004 5:33 pm
I liked how you discribed the sprites movements as childlike and full of energy. Characters were fine. Please continue.
 
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
Sat May 15, 2004 10:44 am
Just a question; will you update anytime soon? Please....
 
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