Joined: 16 Nov 2003 Reviews: 43
Location: North of the River and south of the Sun
Fri Feb 06, 2004 9:59 am
This certainly explored an unspoken path. Well written though and it made me think along the 'what if' trail
Moralanqua
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Sun May 09, 2004 7:30 am
An interesting concept but its way too short and the language becomes stilted in places. You should definately expand this and explore these characters more! The idea would also make a fantastic OFC/OMC fic! Well done!
ps - Im telling Faramir on you!
Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sun May 09, 2004 11:41 am
Well done! As mora mentioned, you should give more on the characters and their personalities. An original idea! It's gets people thinking....
amarie
Joined: 03 Oct 2005 Reviews: 1
Location: sittard
Wed Oct 05, 2005 9:13 am
I am new to these boards, so my review is a little late. I just wanted to tell you I loved this story. It's a shame that you didn't continue it. I would have loved to know what happenend to Arwen, did she die or remained in Middle Earth looking for revenge on Eowyn and Elessar. Did Elessar regret marrying Eowyn knowing that Arwen never sailed to Valinor? I hope you will consider adding more chapters.