Reviews for "A Tangled Web"

Mon Nov 08, 2004 7:30 pm

i read this story on fanfiction about a summer ago...still love it!
if you write another story - i'll be your first reiviewer!

texasgirl

Fri Mar 04, 2005 12:13 am

Oh Oh Oh!! I just spent lots of paper printing this out...and a bit of time reading! I think there should be a sequel!! Yes! A brilliant idea!!! So... when is the first chapter coming out? Well... hmm?? Oh, it was such a good story, captured a range of my emotionsL: giddiness, laughter, anger, frustration, tears, rapture. Yes, those are really all emotions but I did experience them all when reading the story! Oh deary me it was such a good story. There are two new pairs of twins that you could write with. And you are superb and doing plot twists and such, so why not!!!!!! Puuhhhh-lllleeeeeeeeaaaze!!!!!!! ^.^ Pour moi!

Thu Aug 11, 2005 1:50 pm

I don't usually like prankster stories, but this drew me in. It was very clever and hilarious. Loved it.

Fri Sep 09, 2005 3:26 pm

This story is so funny. It was serious and then funny in the next moment. I loved it.
"Giveme my pants, but you don't need them. You have very nice legs" That one was the funniest line that has keeps me laughing.

evenstar5

Tue May 22, 2007 12:00 pm

Lol, highly amusing. I really liked the part about Elrond being able to clear the courtyard...

Tue May 22, 2007 12:36 pm

Poor Haldir...I feel bad for him here. One small suggestion though, you seem to be using the terms women and men for elliths and ellons at times. It's a small mistake that is easily made (I know I do it sometimes to) but it is noticeable and should be corrected. I've seen it in a few of the other chapters here too and I think the story would be better if the corrections were made.

You have a truly wonderful storyline here. I'm loving it.

Tue May 22, 2007 3:09 pm

LOL! I love how Orophin thinks the ellith is smitten with him when she really loathes him. Hilarious.

Tue May 22, 2007 3:35 pm

Oh dear, Erestor is going to be locked in Estel's room! I bet no one will find him for a long, long time...lol.

Tue May 22, 2007 4:18 pm

LOL! Erestor cleaned Estel's room...

Tue May 22, 2007 5:48 pm

Lol, I like the part where Celeborn is all like "You mean you would stoop to spying on them?" Galdriel says "yes" and he says "Oh good." That made me laugh so hard.

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