Reviews for "A Tangled Web"

Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:33 am

That’s so cruel of Orophin and Rumil….writing that letter! I mean, they might be trying to help, but….. *sighs* well…… anyway…… the reactions that could evolve are truly from drastic to nonexistent!

The part with the roses from Orophin….*sighs* it’s so sweet! But why won’t Meril believe he’s serious!?! I mean, I’m still puzzling about how she wants to get married for ….. whatever instead of love!?! I mean, elves live forever… so she would have to spend eternity with whomever she would choose…. Please don’t let her do that?!? I mean, he seriously loves her! She’s the only one who can’t see it….*grumbles*…….By the way, why does she feel that way about roses? You didn’t explain….She’s truly fascinating…we know so little about her!?!

And what’s up with the twins? Another prank?!? I Sure hope Haldir finds someone………..But anyway, the story is great! Keep writing!
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Fri Apr 16, 2004 1:58 am

Nicari you were right:

"Yes, I seem to remember having some rope in my study." Erestor said with a dull frown

ROLFLMAO!!! I about died laughing. Having Glorfindel and Erestor help in the matchmaking, too funny.
I adore the game that Galadriel and Celeborn play. I like that they seem more equals and he is not just her arm ornament.

I just seem to have this facination with rope. Rope and Erestor......Drool.

Fri Apr 16, 2004 2:47 am

Elrohir and Elladan= molasses and feathers. Oh boy! Gee why do I think that is sexy?.........I must be a bit twisted..yeah that is it.
Orophan and Rumil, how much troubles can they possibly get into? The mind boggles.
Celeborn and Galadriel, will they ever get some?
Erestor..sense of humor? Yes ladies and gentlemen he does have one, Hurrah!
I like the pairing of Indelan and Elladan, It would be sweet.
Poor Haldir I want to give him a hug, will he ever be happy?
All out of chapters..... 3 am..oh my!
Vice-president of the ATW Anon fan club
Amy L

Sat Apr 17, 2004 3:07 pm

YAY! I can't believe it's saturday... that means tomorrow there'll be an update right? *puppy eyes* Please? I just reread it again... always seems better than the last time! lol Very Happy smiley face

Sun Apr 18, 2004 1:37 am

As I sit here, Niennanir,
Night marches and dawn growns near.
Haldir grumbles, the Twins plot,
Elladan makes me swoon alot.

What will be of 28?
Will the Lorien brothers be too late?
Will Indelin find her true mate?
Or Eirien's lust turn to hate?

And what of Meril, so brave and strong.
I pray that her walls come down before too long.
Arwen and Aragorn are lovely to see.
Gladders and Celeborn are always frisky.

I have reread too much and lingered so.
Will this tale ever let me go?
It is what keeps me from my bed,
The hopeful update of A Tangled Web.

***Just thought I'd say HIYA! ****

Pres. ATW Anon.

Sun Apr 18, 2004 2:31 pm

I loved it! I'm starting to miss Eirien and Meril, they haven't appeared much in the last chapters! Anyway, I was curious.. that note, did Arwen really write that or did her brothers? What other notes are flying around? This is so mystifing! I can't wait for the next chapter! My my, I really am becoming greedy! Wink smiley face

I just wanted to let you know, you should take up the technique you used in the beginning: show us what's in the character's minds... it's interesting. Is it just me, or are a few *cough* all right! All hearts gonna be broken before any are healed? I'm really worried about Haldir.. not too much on him.. is he fading? Cause then we have a problem! Wink smiley face

The part with Indelin was really sweet! She's really in love.. *swoon* I'm a hopeless romantic.. as well as being this evil being that loves seeing everyone's lives upside down! (Otherwise, I'm quite... sweet?) Laughing smiley face

Keep writing, cause I can't wait! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Apr 18, 2004 4:48 pm

Nienna!!! This is just getting better and better with each chapter! I keep being amazed at how you keep track of everything, I am specially in love with the budding romance between Elladan and Indelin! Poor Legolas and poor Haldir I hope everyone will be ok in the end, but either way I just love it!!

Thanks.

Sun Apr 18, 2004 5:11 pm

This just keeps getting better as it progresses!! I loved Orophin's confidence and Rumil's vanity, those Lorien brothers have it and they know it!

I never tire of Arwen and Legolas ~ their conversation in the first chapter has always been one of my favs and I love to read about their sweet and deeply bound friendship. Blessed Eru, I felt Legolas' pain and agony when he read the letter. Heh. And to think that Legolas must believe that Glorfindel knows....LOL! Oh, poor Legolas!!

I was so pleased with Indelin's confession to Arwen. She is so sweet and it was interesting to hear Arwen's response, and then "Haldir's" letter appears.... tangle, twist, gasp!

Okay, now about Aragorn and Arwen... this was beautiful. I could feel the weight of his fate and destiny on his shoulders. I have always wanted to see how this moment came about. Thank you!!! Arwen's instant and unwavering confidence in what power and abilities are inside of him was delightful to read. They are already what dreams are made of...*sign* Beautiful Nienna!

Letters, pranks, miscommunication, beautiful elves....ah, I love ATW! Very Happy smiley face

Bravo!!!!

Sun Apr 18, 2004 6:25 pm

Oh, Nienna! I LOVED this! It is as if I can see the events as they transpire, and I can feel the emotions as well; writing like this with such a complicated yet understandable plot is extremely rare! Oh, and Elladan covered in molasses? *drools*

But Erestor smirking? Yes, that does me in. *THUD*

I suppose I will stop now before I get too incredibly annoying... but I will be on pins and needles all week wondering how much more tangled this web can get! Those letters getting all mixed up and swapped out are throwing me for a loop!

Sun Apr 18, 2004 9:07 pm

Hurrah! The plot thickens. Just when I thought it could not get any more tangled. If the twins get caught they will be in so much trouble. Poor Legolas....it is his turn to be tortured. I really like Indelin, I wonder if she was talking about Elladan? I really like the segment with Aragorn doubting himself and Arwen comforting him, it was touching. This just keeps getting better and better.
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Amy L
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