Reviews for "A Tangled Web"

Sun Apr 25, 2004 3:03 pm

*puppy eyes* It's sunday evening... won't we get our weekly update? Please? How are we to live another tough weeek of work without it? Bunny smiley face

Sun Apr 25, 2004 8:01 pm

Time to re-read... always a pleasure!! Try reading from a different POV Monaleoht. That is always fun to do.

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I know, I need a life. I think I could lead a most excellent in depth course on the study of these characters and this tale by now. *snicker*

Nicari
Pres of ATW Anonymous

Sat May 01, 2004 11:05 am

Thanks Nicari! I'll give it a try!

29 - beautiful! So much fun... and was it just my imagination, or was Indelin not so happy with Orophin? What a mess! I'm kinda scared for Haldir... he seems to be fading.... And Legolas! I hope he finds someone - that way he can stop running! Though, I must say, it is excellant excercise for him! Laughing smiley face

That scene with Elrohir and Eiren was so sweet - how she messed up because she's so in love! Oh.... but he has to tell her.......... she won't hate him, will she??? Oh boy............. Well, this seems to be only getting to the middle - everything's getting more tangled, not yet even starting to straighten itself out.... lol! Very Happy smiley face

Keep writing!
Mona

Fri May 07, 2004 7:03 am

Hi! Thanks for sending me the link to your story. I'm definitly enjoying catching up. So far I have read up to Chocies and Chance (cahp 1 Cool smiley face

. Poor Indelin - not having much luck is she? What will happen to Erestor in Aragorn' room? And when will Meril learn that Orophin is the one for her? I am eager to see how Rumil and Orophin try to cheer up Haldir, even if Elrohir fell into their trap and not Legolas. Aragorn and Arwen are cute- their developing relationship is progressing nicely, but when will Legolas know that Estel is Arewn's compaion and what will he think? Glorfindel was, and still is, in love with an elf maiden. That was a surprise. I hope he will find her one day.

Onto more chapters!

Jadwiga

Sat May 08, 2004 8:35 am

Yay, I have caught up! I enjoyed doing so. Arwen and Aragron playing together by the pool was lovely and romantic. However, when will Arwen tell Legolas and Legolas tell Arwen of his deception? Also I loved Arwen's song - it reminded me of the Hobbit. When Arwen helped Aragorn understand his heritage and what he might have to do, I thought this reflected Arwen's character correctly. If I'm not mistaken Elladan loves Indelin and vice-versa, but 'Orophin's' letter complicates matters. As does Legolas beleving Arwen loves him. Perhaps he and Haldir will find comfort with each other. Just don't let Haldir fade!

Keep writing,

Jadwiga

Mon May 10, 2004 4:33 am

I don't think I can take much more suspense. What will happen to Aragorn? Meril is falling in love with Orophin it appears! Haldir was rather funny in this chapter. I feel sorry for Elladan: he likes Indelin and his brother is pretending to be him. However, I think Elrohir should reveal all soon - after all he is the son of Elrond Half-Elven, mighty among Elves and Men- therefore certainly not a coward. Please do not drag out the suspense for much longer!

Jadwiga

Mon May 10, 2004 11:52 am

OUCH! Poor Aragorn! I wonder what Arwen will say?!? Perhaps she'll help him get back at her brothers.. *grins evilly* Anyway, it seems that Meril is falling for Orophin! But when do we learn why she *cough* "can't"? Elrohir is gonna be in trouble if he keeps this up... Plus, that kiss that Elladan gave Indelin.. perhaps he's starting to notice his feelings?!? Getting better everytime... *sighs* Well, I'm off for a re-read. Anyone else? Very Happy smiley face

Mona
Vice-President of ATW Anonymous
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Mon May 10, 2004 9:52 pm

I am so pleased that Merill cannot get Orophin's gifts out of her mind. I want to know when the last time was that she felt as awful as she does thinking of Legolas leaving...

Indelin's letter... in the larder... with two drunk elves. Who knows where that will end up, or hopefully, it will get lost in there forever! Rolling Eyes smiley face

Elladan... could you please convince your brother to reveal his identity to Eirien so you are off the hook and Indelin can give herself permission to fall for you?

I swooned for Elorhir's sweetness to Eirien, this is so romantic *sigh*.

Aragorn and Arwen... their love is already as strong as mithril. Now, if only the rest of Arda could only see that.

I am really enjoying Legolas and Haldir interacting. It is interesting to get their POV, opposite as they may be when it comes to elleths. I am glad Haldir seems more light-hearted now.

I cannot wait to see more!! Very Happy smiley face

Thu May 13, 2004 2:56 pm

Just reread the whole thing! So sweet... *sighs*... The way Elrohir is so delighted when Eiren falls in His arms and how he treats her... *swoons* Very Happy smiley face

Sat May 15, 2004 6:05 pm

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oh, and

again.

(since you already have my other review)

More please!!! This is quite the cliffhanger we are dangling over....

Pres ATW Anon

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