Reviews for "A Tangled Web"

Sun Jun 06, 2004 5:35 pm

Oh, BRAVO, BRAVO. I am speechless.... just amazing. This blows me away. I must go and read it again, it will be the third time, and I am still in awe of your writing. You warned me about this chapter and I was wary. But, oh, this is just fantastic. So much emotion, so much revealed.

From the first sentence ~ Arwen, Aragorn, orcs, injuries, fear. I think I held my breath from the first rustle of the bush.

Ell & Ro ~ I am stunned, heart broken, amazed.

The sweet elleth ~ Meril, she finally sees. Eirien, oh Valar, help her to forgive. Indelin, I have to go and hug her. And to witness Ell's fury! I am still at a loss for words.

Haldir with Aragorn ~ I knew it would come to this.

Orophin ~ Ouch. I can't imagine being the target of Elladan's wrath. He was being a balrogion though. I thought Rumil would thump him on the head, and rightfully so! I love Indelin and to have him be so harsh to her.... grrrrrrrr.

It was good to see Elrond, Erestor, and Fin again too.

WOW. BRAVO Nienna. I love this. So passionate and with so much emotion. Legolas is right. There was a lot more going on in Imladris than he knew.

Just brilliant. This has pushed out the other as my favorite chapter.

Sun Jun 06, 2004 6:55 pm

WOW!! What a chapter! I was completely blown away. You were right everything literally exploded in this chapter. Poor poor Haldir... Elladan and Elrohir have finaly gone too far with their pranks. Elrond now knows about Arwen and Estel the next chapter will be facinating! I cannot wait to read it. Indelan, I do hope she ends up with Elladan. Meril and Orophin..hmm Maybe she does believe him now. I am dying to find out what happens.
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Amy Vice-President of ATW Anon.

Sun Jun 06, 2004 7:47 pm

Wow. This chapter is absolutley amazing...things really did come to a head. You're descriptions are so wonderful....I especially loved the bits with Arwen and Estel. My nails are bitten to the quick...I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Scarlett

Mon Jun 07, 2004 7:02 am

At last everyone knows. Ohh Elrond isn't happy about Arwen and Aragorn; but perhaps Arwen will believe Aragorn about Haldir and Aragorn about Legolas - that is if they agree to listen to each other. Elrohir's deception is out and Elladan acted crazy. All Imraldis is or will be in uproar, what will happen next? Confused smiley face

: I look forward to your next chapter with bated breath. Fireworks are bound to expolde.

Jadwiga

Wed Jun 09, 2004 7:25 am

Ah no what is goign to happen next! Who is going to get with who etc. etc i want to know, PLease lease update soon and if you didn't realise, i thought it was a really good chapter

Sun Jun 13, 2004 5:51 am

Please, please update Soon smiley face

! I can't wait!!!! Very Happy smiley face

Mon Jun 14, 2004 1:24 pm

No updates this week? Crying or Very sad smiley face

Please, please update Soon smiley face

!!!

Sun Jun 20, 2004 1:17 pm

Please update! PLEASE! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Jun 20, 2004 10:36 pm

Finally another update! Yay! This chapter was pivotal and engaging. I am wondering if it is coming to an end, I hope not too soon. It has been so fun reading how this web has become tangled and now watching as they begin to unwind it! Hmm, praytell? do you have more fun instore for us, I hope so!!

Ilistine Very Happy smiley face

Mon Jun 21, 2004 3:08 am

Brilliant chapter. I loved the song that Aragorn and Haldir were singing - it was very funny. So Elladan has finally realised he is love! Ahhh, when the twins, Rumil and Orophin discover their web of deciet Legolas is furious; acting like his father? Excellent, that part was very amusing Wave smiley face

I espeically enjoyed it when Aragorn put the deceitful Elves in their place - as Legolas thinks, not very often a mortal can do such a thing - two times now. Yet I felt so sorry for him - I only hope things can be made better for him, Haldir and Arwen. Please update soon - don't make us wait two weeks!

Jadwiga Witch smiley face

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