Reviews for "Life's Path"

Sun Feb 15, 2004 1:29 am

Yea...I'm your first real reviewer, I feel honored. I'm new when it comes to the whole written reviews on this site so bear with me. I actually really like Anis; she's strong willed and definetly not a mary-sue. I can rarely stand those types of characters. How old is she? So was that like her final good-bye to her family? Will there be any action in this story; like maybe she starts training, goes on a couple patrols, etc. Oh well...I'm not really sure. Anyways, keep writting-sounds good so far!

Sun May 30, 2004 12:24 pm

I really like the concept and story outline - what a good idea to take up the story of Arwen's daughter and mix it with everyone's favourite March Warden! The story is shaping up very well. Hope you don't mind some constructive criticism: I don't know if you have a beta, but you have a fair few typos and occasionally the mix of modern american prose with middle earth english strikes me as a little incongrous ... maybe one style or another would be better, rather than mixing the two? PLEASE don't mistake me, this is a really enjoyable story, just needs a little polishing (easy for me to say - I'm a reader, not a writer). Keep going!

Thu Jun 24, 2004 9:52 pm

Yea! I am so happy you posted a new chapter... I was affraid you had forgotten about it! I like the story line very much... and not just because I enjoy Haldir fics. Very good fic, and I hope there will be more soon. Very Happy smiley face

Thu Jul 08, 2004 3:21 pm

I like this story a lot! Thanks for keeping on with it and, please, do update it soon. Very well drawn heroine, strong, likeable and believable; a woman worth emmulating. Your Haldir, on the other hand, is showing a decidedly dark side of himself. Rolling Eyes smiley face

Hopefully he'll wise up soon. Looking forward to seeing the story develop. Wink smiley face

Wed Jul 14, 2004 5:54 pm

I'm really enjoying this. Annis is great. Please post again soon.

Fri Feb 04, 2005 2:02 am

Yay

Finally....after all this time. I'm sooo glad you updated and have not abandoned this. I had to go back and re-read so I wouldn't be completely lost.

Of course, I think I know who was in the bushes and what he saw....and of course he left too soon to hear what she said afterwards. Crying or Very sad smiley face

Elrond is being a pain in the a**, but I see where he is coming from. I hope you write more soon.

Talasi

Tue Feb 08, 2005 11:51 pm

I'm really loving where you're going with this story. It seems that so far the only ones of Annis' family that approves of her being with Haldir is Galadriel and Celeborn. I have the feeling that the rustling that they heard was Haldir. And that he saw them kissing. I hope I'm wrong., since they've already have problems as it is.

Mon Mar 28, 2005 1:33 pm

More , more, more!!!! You can't stop there!!! Keep them coming. hehehe............we're hanging whilst we wait!

Great stuff.

Kym

Mon Mar 28, 2005 11:58 pm

I have the feeling that Galadriel is going to inform Haldir of the mistake he's made with Annis. At least I hope she does. Haldir should've explained to Annis what he saw and gave her a chance to tell him everything else that happened. But after the way he's treated her, I wouldn't be surprised if Annis wants nothing to do with him. I hope Haldir feels really bad for his cruelty.

Fri Apr 01, 2005 12:03 am

I'm really curious to know who it is Annis is to marry. I'm hoping that Haldir decides to go get Annis, or someone decides to go get him for her, such as Maresto. I'm really looking forward to seeing this all get resolved, but I'm sure that will be a long time coming , if at all.

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