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allura
Joined: 11 May 2004
Reviews: 5
Location: southern USA
Wed May 12, 2004 6:43 pm

Oh i sooo want to see how you get her out of this one.. lol.. or hmm.. so many naughty ideas going through my head right now.. lol.. please continue this..
 
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: 
Wed Aug 25, 2004 4:38 pm

Shocked smiley face woooooooo this is really good ,i thought it was funny hildar giving her the ice glare Evil or Very Mad smiley face so is she ganna be able to melt his icey heart???
Please post Soon smiley face
 
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WebWalker
Joined: 18 Sep 2004
Reviews: 20
Location: Maine - USA
Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:42 pm

Oh how oh how are you going to get your OC out of this one? Hm? I like the story, but there are a few grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes that should be cleared up. That would make the story read a lot more smoothly.

Keep up the good work!! Smile smiley face
 
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
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Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:31 am

Confused smiley face so whats happen Exclamation smiley face Confused smiley face: why no updates ? it a good story .
i would love to see how she gets out of this one ,lol
Tess
 
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
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Wed Nov 03, 2004 2:09 am

Shocked smiley face my my so we do se the other side of hilar Fallen angel smiley face lucky girl my my wonder how she ganna handle the both of them,Mmmmmmmmmmm Violin Music smiley face
i like this story and i like where its going so far.
please up date SOON Exclamation smiley face Exclamation smiley face Exclamation smiley face
Tess
 
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
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Fri Apr 08, 2005 9:22 pm

Smile smiley face hi just wondering what happen with this story Confused smiley face: Confused smiley face:
hope you can up date soon
Tess
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Tue Jun 21, 2005 12:33 pm

This story has a great start. I am enjoying the possibilities and complexity of it. Any chance for an update?
 
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
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Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:31 pm

hi agin ,was jsut wonder why this story stoped , Confused smiley face: Confused smiley face: it is such a good story , really looking forward to the next chapter.
please update soon.
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Tue Apr 03, 2007 4:37 pm

Hi. Like the others I am wondering when you will finaly not only update this one but also another story in this archive that you also wrote. I think I sent you an email about that one. I will send another email again to see how you are doing. But Yes please keep this going.
 
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