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allura
Joined: 11 May 2004 Reviews: 5
Location: southern USA
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Wed May 12, 2004 6:43 pm
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| Oh i sooo want to see how you get her out of this one.. lol.. or hmm.. so many naughty ideas going through my head right now.. lol.. please continue this.. |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Wed Aug 25, 2004 4:38 pm
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woooooooo this is really good ,i thought it was funny hildar giving her the ice glare so is she ganna be able to melt his icey heart???
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WebWalker
Joined: 18 Sep 2004 Reviews: 20
Location: Maine - USA
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Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:42 pm
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Oh how oh how are you going to get your OC out of this one? Hm? I like the story, but there are a few grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes that should be cleared up. That would make the story read a lot more smoothly.
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:31 am
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so whats happen : why no updates ? it a good story .
i would love to see how she gets out of this one ,lol
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Wed Nov 03, 2004 2:09 am
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my my so we do se the other side of hilar lucky girl my my wonder how she ganna handle the both of them,Mmmmmmmmmmm
i like this story and i like where its going so far.
please up date SOON
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Fri Apr 08, 2005 9:22 pm
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hi just wondering what happen with this story : :
hope you can up date soon
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Tue Jun 21, 2005 12:33 pm
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| This story has a great start. I am enjoying the possibilities and complexity of it. Any chance for an update? |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:31 pm
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hi agin ,was jsut wonder why this story stoped , : : it is such a good story , really looking forward to the next chapter.
please update soon. |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Tue Apr 03, 2007 4:37 pm
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| Hi. Like the others I am wondering when you will finaly not only update this one but also another story in this archive that you also wrote. I think I sent you an email about that one. I will send another email again to see how you are doing. But Yes please keep this going. |
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