Reviews for "Love is a Fallacy"

Sat Mar 06, 2004 12:55 pm

It's wonderful. I hope you keep going! Very Happy smiley face

Tue Mar 09, 2004 5:20 pm

So how is this based on Middle Earth? Does she get to go or something and makes friends with the elves???

Elenya_Eavenstar

Guys like that btw are perverts jerks and overall b******s

Sun Mar 14, 2004 1:17 pm

I like your character, I feel her grief.... please continue... her world had gone black.....

Sat Mar 20, 2004 12:23 am

I love your story so far! You left me floating mid-air at the last line of the chapter. What did Legolas see in her eyes? I wanna know really bad. I don't care how accurate your facts are-just please keep writting b/c so far it's a good story. Very Happy smiley face

Fri Apr 02, 2004 9:41 pm

ohhh i really like this story!!! its kinda funny, about the cds (im guessing they were cds) it would have been fun if he has managed to find a cd player and accidently turn it on... haha! well great job! keep it up, and we all understand how busy life can get, but think of this as a way to get away from the real world and all of the crap in it! ~Lisa

Tue May 11, 2004 2:56 pm

please please say you are going to continue this story.. you just cant leave poor leggy thinking she is an orc creature.. lol.. he will be stunned to see such hair if nothing else.. please update .. i will beg if i need to!! Very Happy smiley face

Sat Jul 24, 2004 12:25 am

Your OC has certainly been through enough painful life experiences that would explain her attitude towards life and people in general. However, you might be painting yourself into a corner by creating such an extreme character. It will take a great deal of careful work to pull off a plausible transition from a girl who doesn't trust anyone to someone who actually cares for Legolas.

Sun Jul 25, 2004 4:51 am

Could you please fix the formatting? Its so off putting that I stopped reading.

Mon Jul 26, 2004 8:28 pm

Well, I have nothing against Sues (and over-done premises) so I decided to give this a try. The dialogue is a mite shotty (that should NOT be read 'shitty' btw) Wink smiley face

You also seem to want to explain everything all at once. While sometimes things are needed (and a comendable attribute in most cases), it is compromising the present events. Try to let things play themselves out instead, we dont mind waiting Very Happy smiley face

I will keep an eye on this.

Thu Aug 19, 2004 10:56 pm

Why did it take so long to update? PLease update soon!!! I really like this stroy and can't wait to read the next chapter! Very Happy smiley face

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