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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:43 pm
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wooo mm this has got me curious so what happen ?when the next chapter : :
this is good so far .love how leggy reacter to the cp player ,that was pricless
so when the next chapter :  |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:35 am
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hi , just curios when you mite up date agin ,very good story |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Mon Oct 04, 2004 8:12 pm
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hi,
what happen, how come no more up dates : are you stuck with the story .
or just busy. it does seem to be a busy year for a lot of people.
please update soon.
Tess  |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Thu May 19, 2005 12:06 am
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wow i like this story i think its well done and who cares if it is a mary sue ,
right now i really think legolas is really bieng an Jackass and needs to be kicked a good one,lol
and i really curious what this wizard has to say about raven.
Please update SOON  |
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TaintedDream
Joined: 29 Jun 2005 Reviews: 1
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 2:09 am
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I saw your a/n about Fruits Basket and well I absolutely love the show and I'm up to book 5.
So, go ahead and ask me whatever you wanted to know, well if you haven't found someone already. lol.
Good story by the way =D lol |
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Xyzzy
Joined: 20 Jul 2005 Reviews: 5
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Wed Jul 20, 2005 9:10 am
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I agree with you, rape is a bad plot device.
But it is not bad, not bad at all. Keep going! |
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
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Sun Aug 07, 2005 6:12 pm
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I really liked your story. I hope that you update soon. Thanks for the great story.  |
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japete
Joined: 20 Jan 2005 Reviews: 23
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Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:21 pm
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Shorter chapters and more frequent or longer chapters and less frequent. Hmmmm. That's a tough one. I vote for whatever combination keeps you on course and keeps your muse happy. The plot is thickening and the firstborn aren't firstborn anymore, powers need to be discovered and developed, Raveyn needs some manners and Legolas needs a slice of humble pie. So much to do; don't keep us on the edge of our seats for long. More, pretty please.  |
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Grianna
Joined: 03 Jul 2004 Reviews: 9
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Tue Aug 09, 2005 3:31 pm
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Short and frequent, longer ones less often, either works for me as long as you enjoy writing this story.  |
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
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Tue Aug 09, 2005 10:41 pm
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I love chapters 10 and 11. this story is progressing nicely. As to your poll I would rather have shorter chapters and more frequent updates than longer chapters and less updates. The shorter we have to wait the better to await your genius writings. Well keep on writing and keep up the great work. Question will o/c and legolas end up having a romantic interlude. I always love reading about happy endings. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
loves, evenstar5 : :  |
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