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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Thu Aug 11, 2005 5:28 pm
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I absolutly love this story. It gets better with each chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Pleas eupdate again soon.
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Tylany

Joined: 07 Aug 2005 Reviews: 14
Location: Stuck in a daydream.
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Sat Aug 13, 2005 1:38 pm
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This story is progressing nicely, and you are clearing up some of my questions, while balancing it out with more unanswered questions. Which is good because I dislike when you know what is going to happen. It is better when you leave questions so we will come back to get the answers. The chacter devolpment is going smoothly. I beleive shorter chapters with shorter time after would be better, but do it whichever way makes you feel better.  |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Wed Sep 21, 2005 5:56 pm
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she really put the prince of pointy ears and some other in there place didn't she, lamo
i think its great how you are giving the careter of the king of mirkwood a good postive instead of a negitve like some of the other authors out there , it's kinda funny to see leggy behaveing the way he is behaving but i cant say i entily blame him it does fit with him some tho.i look forward to more chapters .
PLease Update Soon.
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:57 am
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Please give us an update. I am dying to know what happens next after ch 13. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Tylany

Joined: 07 Aug 2005 Reviews: 14
Location: Stuck in a daydream.
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Wed Oct 26, 2005 3:12 pm
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Yay!! I was going to cry if you did not update soon, but thankfully for my eyes you did.
The name-less one intrigues me a bit, and do the creatures that killed the White people. I would greatly appreciate it if you would widen the facts given about them.  |
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Fri Dec 02, 2005 7:42 pm
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Oh I love this I can't wait to see Raveyns reaction to Legolas. Like you said things are heating up. I can't wait to see what happens next. Now for the questions you requested:
How is it that she is an elf? What is her importance in middle earth? Also I am dying to know how Raveyn will take to the mews that Legolas is now her mentor and companion. One more thing I was wondering is are these two gonnan end up romantically involved. I hope so. Await the next chapter. Please post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  |
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Fri Dec 09, 2005 11:27 pm
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Things are really coming together. I can't believe that she cried in front of legolas. I await chapter 16. Can't wait to read it.
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Grianna
Joined: 03 Jul 2004 Reviews: 9
Location: PA
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Fri Feb 24, 2006 12:52 am
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I have two words.
Want more. |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:19 pm
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| Pleas UP DATE SOON!!!! ,love this story |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Thu May 25, 2006 2:45 am
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This is a really a great story! I loved it! You want to know how much I loved it? I started reading chapter 1 at 10:30p.m and just now finished chapter 19 at 2:42a.m. That is how much I enjoyed it. It is a story you can't put down. Please update soon very  |
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