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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Thu Jun 17, 2004 10:50 am
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Finally an update! lol. A sweet chapter! She must have been so embarrased... you write very well!  |
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Losille

Joined: 04 Mar 2004 Reviews: 13
Location: Phoenix, AZ, USA
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Thu Jun 17, 2004 3:23 pm
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Time for a veggie and fruit dance....
Finally! Thank you for the great chapter... may the muse keep guiding your hands, and the grammar/spelling/plot gods move your beta along so we may receive more enjoyable chapters.
It is wonderful,
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Sorcia

Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Fri Jun 18, 2004 12:29 am
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Yeah! New chapter! WooHoo!!! Happy to see you back at this story! Looking forward to many more chapters as Penda learns to fit in etc. . How long will Elrond hold out..Hmmmmm??? 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Fri Jun 18, 2004 10:29 am
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Great! Hopefully the updates will continue so fast...lol. A sweet chapter- a feast? Wow,that's tough! Poor her!  |
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004 Reviews: 133
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Fri Jun 18, 2004 6:14 pm
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The feast is just going to cause her sorrow...perhaps a certain lord can help with that?
Please continue |
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004 Reviews: 133
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Thu Jul 29, 2004 11:29 am
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| Elrond and those sheer gowns... How much control can he master? let's see what we have in store next. |
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004 Reviews: 133
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Sat Aug 28, 2004 7:32 pm
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| Way too short! Well what will happen next? |
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Ninde
Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: Headed for Middle Earth
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Fri Sep 03, 2004 6:09 am
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| Hey everyone...just a quick note...Due to Hurricane Francis, I will not be posting a chapter for at least the next few days...I live right in it's path, so I will be at work for at least 3 days....Next chapter will be posted as soon as possible, baring no problems with getting power restored...Pat |
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figment

Joined: 29 Jul 2004 Reviews: 3
Location: Kitchener, ON
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Mon Sep 20, 2004 3:59 pm
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Hehehe.. I actually printed off like, a thousand pages to bring this story on vacation with me a couple weeks ago.. hahahah! Anyway, it's a really great story. You've got some grammar problems though - mostly with plurals and possession. But nevertheless, a really great story. I can't wait until they get together... they WILL get together, won't they? 
Update soon!  |
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Thoronsil

Joined: 29 Sep 2004 Reviews: 8
Location: Imladris
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Wed Sep 29, 2004 12:00 am
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I think it's a great story, there should more about elrond halfelven...(his my fav character! ) and I like how you write, it's so vivid and detailed. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'ts like reading a pocket book, I can't put it down! Big fan of your work! Keep it up!  |
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