Reviews for "My Twisted Road to Life: Through A Mirror Darkly"

Mon Apr 05, 2004 12:20 pm

Man, I'm glad I aint those two right now..... XD Moremoremore! So entertaining.....

Fri Apr 09, 2004 12:13 pm

*gleeful squeal* He died! WOO! *bounces* Eee? :3

Sat Apr 10, 2004 3:34 pm

Whoa! You're right! Didn't see that one coming. Hayden's demise was TOO quick & easy, he should have suffered more. Jan should have cut off his "little friend" and beaten him to death with it!!! *scowls menacingly* Okay, I'm back. "We" *grins sheepishly* need to get that girl to M.E.! She really needs some good elf lovin'. On that note, I must say I'm enjoying your disclaimers almost as much as this story.
;} Freya

Mon Apr 12, 2004 11:02 am

Is military assaults against innocent women in America actually devised?

Mon Apr 12, 2004 8:55 pm

LuthienTinuviel said
> Is military assaults against innocent women in America actually devised?

Authoress' response:
To my knowledge assaults against women are not planned by the military. However a report recently issued by the joint chiefs of staff indicated that commanders are aware of assaults and do nothing to punish the offenders and in fact punish the victims for coming forward. That is not speculation, it is substantiated fact. In the story I took the findings of that report a step further, hence the story is fiction. The attack in question in the story actually happened to me and new information has come to indicate I was specifically targeted, but not necessarily at the direction of the military.

Please feel free to contact me if you or anyone else have any further questions.

Tue Apr 13, 2004 12:52 am

Thank you... Smile smiley face

And the story's good, really. I've always preferred the more realistic non-blubby type tales. They're both (bubbly non-bubbly) equally enjoyable, but these sort always lead to more food for thought.

Wed May 12, 2004 6:21 pm

i soooo can not wait to get her to middle earth and have our lovelies meet!! please update soon.. i am in dire need here.. lol.. thanks wren

Thu May 13, 2004 9:04 am

Geez, could anything else happen to this poor woman? I'm hoping that the snap that she heard and felt isn't what I think it is...that would be horrible!

I love your writing style. The song breaks are great, and always seem to fit the mood perfectly. I hope you'll be posting the next chapter soon...I can't wait to find out what happens.

Keep up the good work Wink smiley face

Michelle

Fri Jul 09, 2004 12:49 am

Yay! *dances around* Shana updated! Very Happy smiley face

Stunning descriptions! While I can imagine how confusing it is for the elves, and even Legolas who is seeing this, I am not lost myself. Quite an accomplishment to confuse and simplify at the same time. Their reactions are realistic. The parts that come through Legolas are just enough to confuse the elves and clue us in on what he is seeing.

(Of course, I also love being in the credits, especially when I am tossed over the shoulder of an elf and carried off to do naughty things......GO ME Exclamation smiley face

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*Bows to the mastah* Bow smiley face

Tal

Fri Jul 09, 2004 3:00 am

Wow! Masterfully done! I can understand why this chappie was so long in coming. It was a difficult concept to get across, but you succeeded with flying colors. I found it a little eery 'seeing' things unfold third person. You said you'd wanted to give it a disjointed feeling. . . Oh, yeah, you nailed that but good. The feelings of lack of control and helplessness were almost palpable.

BRAVA!

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