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trekqueen
Joined: 07 Jul 2004 Reviews: 43
Location: Chambers of the Balrog Slayer
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Sat Jul 10, 2004 2:29 pm
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Very nice addition once more! Interesting to see how Legolas reacted to all the news but well done on how he perceived it, came across in the way you meant it to be.
By the way, may I hug Glorfindel? He's just too damn cute.  |
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Wed Jul 21, 2004 12:32 am
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You know what I think....but I'll tell you again anyways. LOVE IT! I hate cliffhangers, but this is an excellent addition to a wonderful story! At least she is ME now. Whew!
The twist of English not being Westron puts another spin on things too. Could things be more complicated for poor Jan? I think not. Pretty good idea......if I do say so myself.
The realization that they are picking up on each others thoughts and feelings is also well portrayed. You get across how confusing it is for both of them.
Of course, Jan's sense of humor just kills me. "Hello. Kinda dead here." ROFLMAO Always and forever a smart ass. Flipping off the Valar was priceless too. Typical Jan. Can't imaging where she gets that from. *looks at Shana*
Talasi
Haldir Worshiper, Craig Parker swooner, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Wed Aug 18, 2004 11:04 am
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Yay! *dances around* As always, wonderful chapter. I like how you described the recognition of her distant look by Glory. Can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up. Please update soon!
Talasi
*back to the craziness that is now my life* |
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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
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Tue Mar 01, 2005 12:44 pm
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Yeah! Shana's back! Welcome back, girlie! Was just thinking about you this past weekend. Sorry to hear about RL (it can be SO inconvenient at times -- hope all is working out for you), anxiously anticipating your updates. (You didn't mention 'The Forsaken,' that's gonna get your attention, too, right?)
Do we really want to know what's unfolding deep in the recesses of a certain redhead's mind? Oh, yeah!  |
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Tue Mar 01, 2005 11:39 pm
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Yay! I'm so beyond glad you have finally had a chance to work on your stories. They are all so wonderful, and this chapter was certainly no exception. I had goosebumps and really felt empty myself in a few spots. Bravo.
I hope we will see more soon... on all of the stories. There is a certain Marchwarden who needs some *ahem* attention. Also, don't forget about E.
Anyway...
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Wed Mar 02, 2005 5:02 pm
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veddy nice.
after this chapter, i think i'll snap if we don't get thos two together - and SOON! ahhhhhhhhh! ok......nevermind me. i'm just going crazy in my little corner of the world.
although.....it would be nice to see an upadter to "two too much to handle" absolutely LOVe the smut in that!
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Spydot
Joined: 19 Jan 2005 Reviews: 15
Location: Canada
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Sun Apr 17, 2005 11:36 am
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| Absolutely amazing. I understand if you are busy and can't update for awhile, but I'll keep checking. You've got me hooked. I love your stories. |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Tue Jun 07, 2005 6:31 pm
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This can't be it? you need to continue! I wanna know if they find each other!! please! I'm beggin ya which I don't do often hehe |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Wed Jun 08, 2005 9:26 pm
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| Wow! Just ran accross this fic, and boy, am I glad I stopped to read! I like the way you write, and I'm on the edge of my seat with this story. Now I have to go read on the other ones you've got up! |
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raelynn48601
Joined: 07 Sep 2005 Reviews: 33
Location: Michigan
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Thu Nov 24, 2005 10:47 pm
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| I have been waiting for this update and I just want to say, wow! I hope that Janessa and Legolas do get through the rough spots. I wonder what is up with Glorfindel being agitated? |
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